nice day
Today was blue sky,very nice day.Though cherry blossom season was over,I have been walking from the office to my home.
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I can think of several ways to rewrite this, but they have more to do with style than grammar.
How about something like this:
"Even though the cherry blossom season is over, I'm still walking home from work every day. Today was a particularly nice day, with a clear blue sky."
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A Nice Day
Today's sky was very blue; sky, a very nice day indeed.__Though the cherry blossom season was just over,_still I have been walking from the office to my home.
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A Nice Day
Today’s sky was very blue.Though the cherry blossom season was just over,I walked from the office to my home because today was a particularly nice day.
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