First time getting drunk!!!!
Well, I have to say it was a total disaster! First time got into a pub and got hangover! My brother said I was like a dead pig when he dragged me back home.. I thrown up on all over him AND all over the taxi! When we arrived the driver wouldn't let us get off unless we paid him extra money for cleaning. So we did..it was so not cool but the strange thing is I still want to go having fun for the second time lol....
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First time getting drunk!!!!
Well, I have to say it was a total disaster! The first time I went to a pub, and I got a hangover the next day! My brother said I was like a dead pig when he dragged me back home.. I threw up on all over him AND all over the taxi! When we arrived home, the driver wouldn't let us get off unless out until we paid him extra money for cleaning. So we did. It was so not cool, but the strange thing is I still want to go have fun for the second time. lol....
A hangover is the headache and nausea and dizziness you experience the day after. You don't get the hangover in the pub, so I added the next day. The original sounded a little strange.
Be sure to write about the second time. And be careful.
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First time getting drunk!!!!
Well, I have to say it was a total disaster! First time I got into a pub and I got a hangover! My brother said I was like a dead pig when he dragged me back home.. I thrown threw up on all over him AND all over the taxi! When we arrived the driver wouldn't let us get off out unless we paid him extra money for having to clean the car. So we did..it was so not cool, but the strange thing is, I still want to go having out and have fun for the second time lol....
Sounds like a typical first time use of alcohol! lol! You did a great job in your writing; just a few corrections. Keep up the good work :)
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Yeah I know . But it was a great experience!lol
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What a long dead
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your story is alike to the rest's because everybody behaves like that when drinking for first time :)...my first time was a few years ago, and it isn't good for me, but little by little i got used to drink. I almost drank every weekend, anyways i don't recommend you to do it, alcohol harms your neurons...that's why i don't drink anymore,i wanted to share my experience. Hope you don't mind
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