I am Cooking

Today is saturday. It`s also "Qingming" Festival of China. I have three days off from 5 Apri to 7 Apri.During the day, I did a lot of housework.In the evening, I cooked the dinner.My classmates think that I cooked very delicious. Such as Fried lettuce, green pepper scrambled eggs, meat eggplant, potatoes braise in soy sauce meat... The end the article with pictures

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Qingyun.He

If you had seperated your days in the story, such as, on the first day, I did this and on the second day, I did this and on the third day, I will do this ... then you could have said, I cooked and cleaned on the first day. On the second day, today, I go buy stuff and eat more stuff. Furthermore, tomorrow, the third, I will sleep the entire day and rest my tired body.

So in my example, I wrote each day as a seperate day. So the actions I write can have a past, a present and a future.

You wrote your story as if all three days were just one time period.

I am Cooking

Today is saturday. It`s also "Qingming" Festival of China. Saturday, April 5th begins the first day of "Qingming" Festival in China. I have the next three days off from 5 Apri to 7 Apri. During the day, I did do a lot of housework. In the evening, I cooked cook the dinner. My classmates think that I cooked cook very deliciously. Such as They love eating my Fried lettuce, green pepper scrambled eggs, meat eggplant, and potatoes braise in soy sauce meat... The end the article with Take a look at the pictures at the end of the article. 

Qingyun.He:

Saturday, April 5th begins the first day of "Qingming" Festival in China. I have the next three days off. During the day, I do a lot of housework. In the evening, I cook the dinner. My classmates think that I cook very deliciously. They love eating my fried lettuce, green pepper scrambled eggs, meat eggplant, and potatoes braise in soy sauce meat. Take a look at the picture at the end of the article.

Qingyun.He:

You wrote your verbs using past tense, using words like (did, cooked, cleaned.) In the context of your story, these verbs should be present tense as if the actions still happen now. Why? Because your story covers three days and the three days have not ended, yet. So everything you do will be the present ...

Now if you had started the story, Last weekend was "QingMing" Festival, then all of those three days would have already happened. Since, only some of the three days have happened, then you are still in the present.