City Life in JiLin < This is an example of a nice title.  (If you find this helpful)

Hello, everyone. Ha ha, I'm always laughing in my essay but nevermind that... 
Today I want to make a brief introduction about the life in my city. The city is named JiLin, it's short for JiLinWuLa. JiLinWuLa, which is Manchu. The mean of JiLinWuLa is that "A city by the river."
JiLin city is in the northeast of China. It's a very beautiful city. There's a river that crosses the city, and there are a lot of mountains around the city. We call it "依山傍水" in Chinese. You can call it "Surrounded by mountains and lakes."  Maybe the sentence I wrote wasn't correct and someone will correct it.  Ha ha. I am always waiting for someone to correct my essays. Continuing the introduction of JiLin, city, we have a comfotable summer in our city because the summer is not as hot as southern of China, it's very cool.

Much improved.  When talking, introducing or teaching about something it's very natural
to mention the name of the person/place or thing many times.  :)  Nice work.  Laughter
can easily be misinterpreted as a bit of nervousness or self-doubt. I'd leave it out to appear
more confident (for now).  That's only my opinion by the way.  Other's will certainly disagree.