Very first diary

Recently, I've felt that I should start to practice English writing.  Good!

But I barely know about expressions in English. *Avoid starting sentences with "But"

*Suggestion: However, (means same thing as "but") I barely know how to express myself in English.

Even I have  Right now I have no chance to get feedback on my writing from people who are mother tongue of English native English speakers.

So, I have decided to publish my weird diaries to you via this service. :)

And I want to get teach from be taught by you**. I always welcome any writing corrections on my diary.  **Suggestion: I want you to teach me.

Just tell me the mistakes that I may make from now or even just previous sentences. *not sure what you're trying to say here.

For paying To repay your efforts, I am definitely going to offer Korean (which is my mother tongue) correction on your diaries in my best. I will do my best.

So, if you want to learn about Korean expressions and culture, just let me know and I will give you a hand for helping. *The American idiomatic expression is "give you a hand" - means the same thing as "help you." Nice use of colloquial language!!
 

My status is same as following Here is my information:

Sex: man *usually we say "male"
Age: 24
Nation: Korea
Living now: Seoul
Hometown: Busan
Education: senior at Sejong Univ.
Major: Computer science
Experience: Android Application publish, Web development, Data Science, Complexity Research etc.

Please contact to me.

**Great entry! Please keep writing, I enjoyed reading it.

My Very first diary

Recently, I've felt that I should start to practice English writing(that's good ^^). But(however)  I barely know about English expression. Since I can't have a full correction of what i write from those how can speak English, I decide to publish my weird diaries to you. And i want to you to teach me English . I'm always open to any writing corrections. Let me know where the mistake is and give me a simple correction :D. And in return I'd gladly help you with your Korean (which is my mother tongue) by correcting your diaries . So, if you want to learn Korean expressions and Culture, just let me know, I will give you a hand for helping.


My status is same as following information.

Sex: male
Age: 24
Nation: Korea
Living now: Seoul
Hometown: Busan
Education: senior at Sejong Univ.
Major: Computer science
Experience: Android Application publish, Web development, Data Science, Complexity Research etc.

Please contact me.

 ( It's not weird at all I think that it is a brave thing to do expressing your self openly and asking for help. keep on the good work FIGHTING ^^ )