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Something About me I work as a teacher now in an education center.But i'm not satisfied with my present job,because this is not what i want.I have to go to work at five p.m from Monday to Friday .Maybe you would think i will be free at weekends.In fact ,i become more busier during the weekends .Because i have classes all day.So i call my weekends "black weekends"

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Something About Me

I work as a teacher now in an education center, but  I'm not satisfied with my present job, because this isn't what I want to do with my life.  I have to go to work at five p.m from Monday to Friday.  Maybe you would think I'd be free on the weekends. However I'm even busier more busier on the weekends because  I have classes all day.  So I call my weekends "Black weekends."

> at 5pm from Monday to Friday (is okay) - you can leave  out the "from" to sound more natural.
Study capitalization and spacing.  To sound more natural use contractions more often (is + not = isn't  etc...)
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Green       =   Another way to say (and/or) more natural (common)
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