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Early to bed ,and early to rise is my dream.Why?Because l can't get up early in the morning,it lead to that I have no time to have breakfast and I can't concentrat on my class.From tomorrow on.I hope I can get up early and have breakfast everyday.（PS.I have another dream,that is..I hope I can keep fit and become more and more charming~*^_^*fighting!!!!!Yulia=^･ω･^=）
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life.
Early to bed, and early to rise is my dream. Why? Because l can't get up early in the morning,. It lead to that Icauses me to have no time to haveeat breakfast, and I can't concentrat on my class. From tomorrow on., I hope I can get up early and have breakfast everyday.（P.S. I have another dream, that is... I hope I can keep fit and become more and more charming~*^_^*fighting!!!!!Yulia=^･ω･^=）
Don't forget to put a space after punctuation(标点以后加空间) ( . , ; : )
连你有一些错误我都明白。
Great work! Keep at it. ^_^
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加油! (=^･ω･^=）
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