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Are these two sentences correct? I do not know whether the following 2 sentences are correct or not. If you wrote the sentences having the similar meanings, what would you say? 1. Increasing economic input in education does not address the wider question of educational inequity, since the root of this problem is uneven distribution of resources rather than the shortage of resources. 2. Some surveys conclude that parents in lacking of education explains quite a considerable amount of the reason why they are more likely to put high values to their children's education, because the former have experienced the disadvantages of lacking of knowledge and skills.

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Are these two sentences correct?

I do not know whether the following 2 sentences are correct or not. If you wrote the sentences having the similar meanings, what would you say?

1. Increasing economic input in funding for education does not address the wider question of educational inequity, since the root of this problem is the uneven distribution of resources rather than the shortage of resources.

2. Some surveys conclude that parents in lacking of education explains quite a considerable amount of the reason why they are more likely to put high values to their children's education, because the former have experienced the disadvantages of lacking of knowledge and skills.

 

Some surveys conclude that parents who lack education tend to value their children's education highly, because they have experienced the disadvantages of lacking knowledge and skills.

 

Very good writing, usage of the term "the former" is very advanced even among native speakers. I rewrote the sentence without it as such a term can make a long sentence confusing.

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Grammatically correct but sounds strange and long winded.

 

Are these two sentences correct?

 

I do not know whether the following 2 two sentences are correct or not. If you wrote the sentences having the similar meanings, what How would you express them more naturally say?

1. Increasing economic input funding/endowment in education does not address the wider question of educational inequity. [I find the sentence a wee bit too long.  If you are using this an essay, the sentence serves as the declaration statement] since The root of this problem is uneven distribution of resources rather than the shortages of resources.

2. Some surveys concluded that parents in lacking of education who are not educated explains quite a considerable amount of the reason why they are more will most likely to put place great high values to on their children's education, because the former as they had have experienced the disadvantages of not having the lacking of knowledge and skills.

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Are these two sentences correct?

I do not know whether the following 2 sentences are correct or not. If you wrote the sentences having the similar meanings, what would you say?

1. Increasing economic input in education does not address the wider question of educational inequity, since the root of this problem is uneven distribution of resources rather than the shortage of resources.

2. Some surveys conclude that parents lacking in education explains a considerable amount of the reason why they are more likely to put high values on their children's education, because the former have experienced the disadvantages of lacking knowledge and skills.

 

Yes, these two sentences are excellent! You write better than most Americans! Seriously! 

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