My Story

Hello,

My name is Rustam. I'm from Russia. I want tell you a little story from my childhood. It's based on a true story. One day, I  came home and I watched a horror movie. When I finished watching the movie, I was scared, because I don't love horrors, stories. Besides, I was alone at home. Evening came, I decided to invite friends. That was not scary, but suddenly the light went out. I went to the balcony and saw that no one had light. (This should be in past tense. More importantly, "no one doesn't" is called a double negative in English. When no and not are used together, they become positive. So "no one doesn't have" means" everyone has.)  I was very scared, and then it began to play on my imagination. I could hear that someone was walking around the room. I could hear water dripping in the tub. I put on a sports jacket, jeans and shoes. I found 100 roubles in my jeans. I bought a Big Snickers and a ticket to/went to a disco. Now, I remember this story with a smile.

Hi Rustam,

* Only the last sentence should be in present tense. Everything else should be in past tense.

* Please, remember to put spaces after punctuation marks. It makes your writing much, much easier to read.