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Rest in peace Andy Andy Irons was bigger than the waves. he cut the waves over and over like a hurricane and his aerial tha became a reference fot me and all of the surfers around the world. he did´nt fit on the waves, he din´t fit in himself. Andy was a Giant. but lost your final battle in a amazing way and ironic above all. victim a disease transmitted by a fragile mosquito. At 32 years old, Andy leaves the scene, but leaves a legacy that will stay on history forever. Rest in Peace, Andy *in a photo, andy surfing in my hood, was a honor and a inspiration...

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Rest in peace Andy

Andy Irons was bigger than the waves. he cut the waves over and over like a hurricane and his aerial tha became a reference fot (for) me and all of the surfers around the world. He did´nt (didn't) fit on the waves, he din´t (didn't) fit in himself. Andy was a Giant. but (you) lost your final battle in a amazing way and ironic above all. victim (of) a disease transmitted by a fragile mosquito. At 32 years old, Andy leaves the scene, but leaves a legacy that will stay on history forever(that will live forever).

Rest in Peace, Andy

*in a photo, andy surfing in my hood, (he) was a honor and a (an) inspiration...

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In words with contractions like didn't the ' replaces the letter that is dropped 
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did not  - didn't 
could not - couldn't 
Andy was a Giant. but lost your final battle in a amazing way and ironic above all. victim a disease transmitted by a fragile mosquito

Andy was a giant, but he lost his final battle in an unbelievable and above all ironic way, victim of a disease.....
É uma sentença muita muita complicada.  

Não sei muito sobre o surfing mas vi a historia da sua morte nas noticias. É um pouco mais irónico porque eu morro na cidade de Dallas e acho que procurou sue corpo perto de Dallas né?

Robert


 

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