Femile...
Today, I went to the cinema with my best friend and sudenlly one child very talkative started to cry because he was lossed, her mom was desapear. 3 hours later one policeman appear and talked with the chilld, because his mom was arrested in the market in front to the cinema, she didn't have money, and his child had hungry, what she could to do?...
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Femile...
Today, I went to the cinema with my best friend and suddenly a very talkative child started to cry because he was lost. His mom had disappeared. 3 hours later a policeman appeared and talked with the chilld because his mom had been arrested in the market in front of the cinema. She didn't have any money, and her child was hungry, what could she do?...
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Femile...
Today, I went to the cinema with my best friend and suddenly one very talkative child started to cry because she was lost. Her mom had dissapeared. 3 hours later one policeman appeared and talked to the child because her mom was arrested in the market in front of the cinema. She didn't have money, and her child was hungry, what could she do?
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Yes Alexander, thank you for your advice, actually I want to say "famine", because the woman was released for steal a bread, but about the history, don't worry about that, I invented this history like example to improve my grammar. Really sorry :(
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Sorry I forgot to say about your title, the word like "Femile" is not correct, I would used the word like "Woman".
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This is a terrible story, I hope the police will release her very soon, and she can be with her child again.
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