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I insist on witing essays.Self introduction 2. Yestoday I went out of the town, so I didn't write essay.So I want to write two essays today. Going on introduce myself, as a young man I know that I must study and work hard, I will pay my most time on study English because I want to go to foreign conmpany to work. I must conmmunite to the foreigner, English, German or someone else. In China, everything are getting more expensive expect the wages, Ha ha, maybe is the same to the other country. I want to get a better job, living in the city is difficult because of the hight price of the house.We can buy a house through the fifteen's wages and don't eatting and drinking. Ha ha, that's truly of our lives.

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I insist on witing essays.Self introduction 2.

Yesterday I went out of the town, so I didn't write an essay.  So today I want to write two essays today. I'll continue to introduce myself.  As a young man I know that I must study and work hard.  I will spend most of my time studying English my most time on study English because I want to work at a company overseas (abroad). I must be able to communicate to a foreigner in English, German or some other language. In China, everything is getting more and more expensive but salaries are not increasing.   Ha ha, maybe it's the same in other countries. I want to get a better job because the prices of houses in the city are expensive.  We can buy a house through the fifteen's wages < I don't understand this) and if we don't eat or drink < I guessed.. Ha ha, that's the truth about of our lives.


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