Hi, can somebody correct this?

Dear National Park Service:
I’m writing to give you some suggestions about what you should do to reduce the negative effect of tourism in the National Park. As a current regular visitor of to this park, I think that the Park staff are only dedicated to giving tourists advice.you may have in the park persons dedicated only to give advice to tourists and Also, I suggest that you may prohibit vehicles from entering in the park for the following reasons:
The tourists mostly are not aware of the rules and regulations.about what can they do and what they can’t, so that’s why giving some persons in the National Park’s staff should have the responsibility of telling enlightening tourists about the conservation rules tips for not damaging the park is a good solution. This should be done in a polite way These persons should give tips without being rude with tourists because being kind with them as it would have has have the desired better results.
Prohibiting vehicles from entering in the park is also a good way to lessen the damage for in the National Park, because cars not only damage the roads scenery and the environment, but they also it they are damaging damage the vegetation and wildlife so if you want the park to be well you should prohibit vehicles.
To conclude, the National Park is a very important place for our country so I hope you take my suggestions into consideration and domy suggestions  something to less damage on for the benefit and conservation of this beautiful natural place.

Hi, can somebody correct this please?

Dear National Park Service:
I’m writing to give you some suggestions about what you should do to reduce the negative effect of tourism in the National Park. As a current visitor of this park, I think you may have in the park persons dedicated only to give advice to tourists and also you may prohibit vehicles in the park for the following reasons.
The tourists mostly don’t know about what can they do and what they can’t, so that’s why giving some persons in the National Park’s staff the responsibility of telling tourists tips for not damaging the park is a good solution. These persons should give tips without being rude with tourists because being kind with them has better results.
Prohibiting vehicles in the park is also a good way to less the damage for the National Park, because cars not only damage the scenery and the environment, but also it they are damaging the vegetation and wildlife so if you want the park to be well you should prohibit vehicles.
To conclude, the National Park is a very important place for our country so I hope you take in consideration my suggestions and do something to less damage on this beautiful natural place.