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thanks guys~~you'r make me happy~~ today I recive a letter which is from a nice girl,it's about my composition written in english. when i saw it ,it was scared me,because there're so many mistakes on it.I'm feeling very shamed.But just a minute.Because i think i cann't waste the time on it rather over think how to improve my poor english,and I hope someday I can chat with someone in english and say,"hi~~nice to meet you,and i think i can teach you english" or someday I can talk to myself "you're so wonderful,now you can say a fluent english,that's too great!" It has about 8 years I leaned english ,even so I can just written and say some simple hello word. I come here because my friend told me there are many people say english with mother tounge . So i'm wating here for someone who can teach me, would really want to help me,no the one just say hello and missing.OK? My subject is japanese,there are also have japanese to help my japanses,I just want to say thank you,because there is no more i can say. Thank guys~~~

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You know, there are many levels and many ways to practice your English. As Nancy says, you should keep to very easy things, beginner level. Your brain works on different levels. Writing notebook essays is very useful, but also easy chatting is very useful, because it makes connections in your brain, even if it's just "hello, how are you today?". If you repeat it every day and you add a little bit every day, you will improve. So, I'm not often online, but we can try to write-chat together. My Chinese is much more basic than your English! Maybe one day that I find the courage we can voice-chat on skype, but I'm still too scared. Also reading helps a lot!!! Try to find easy reading material. And Nancy is right about men. Internet is a bit like a hunting-ground for men (and also women). Please, be very careful with YOUR feelings. I only like to contact women, because I'm tired of all this hunting and flirting and expectations that goes on while interacting with men on internet. Good luck!
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Travel Hope, I think you are doing beautifully. I know how you feel about making so many mistakes. I am learning Spanish and I make alot of mistakes also, but it is how we learn. We learn by our mistakes. Keep up the good work. One day you will be fluent in English and will be able to laugh at all the mistakes you have made. :)
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I know you want to SPEAK better English, but when you write better you will then speak better.
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LOOK FOR THE RED. Learn to capitalize. (this is step one).
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thanks guys~~you'r make me happy~~

Today I recieved corrections from a woman and it was it's about my composition I wrote in English. When i saw it,  it scared me, because there were so many mistakes. on it.  I'm feeling very ashamed.  But just a minute.  I think I shouldn't waste the time on it.  Instead I should work to improve my poor English ability.  I hope someday I can chat with someone in English and say, "Hi~~nice to meet you,and I think I can teach you English" or someday I can say to myself "You're so wonderful...now I can speak fluently in English, that's so great!"
It has about 8 years  since I leaned English but I can only  write or and say some simple phrases.
I come here because my friend told me there are many native English speakers here. 
So I'm wating here for someone who can teach me, Who would really want to help me?, no the one just say hello and missing.OK?
My other subject of study  is Japanese. If anyone here can help me improve my Japanese, I thank you in advance.   This is all I can say.

Thank you.

#1)  SEE all the RED >>>>Study capitalization.  
                                              "i" when by itself is always a big letter - capitalized.  
                                              The first letter of every sentence must be big - capitalized.
        PLEASE do this.  I will not continue to correct if you to not try to learn at least this much.
#2) Write sentences that are more simple.  Not so tough. 
       Write short essays.   Do not write how you speak.  Write at your level.  Beginner.
#3) Don't worry about the rest for now.  --- You have a lot to learn. 

Red                  = Capitalization
Blue                 =  Correction and Spelling
Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common
Purple               =  My comment or suggestion
Underline          = Punctuation and/ or  spacing
 

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