Can somebody help me with the redaction of my dedications ??? please

I'm not sure about grammar !!
Help please :)

There is a number of people without whom this work would not have been achieveable; I want to dedicate this thesis to my whole family and friends who always supported me on my way.
To the woman I admire the most, the owner of my heart and Queen of my life, my lovely mom Ma Lupe.
To the man who lent me his shield and sword, the knight who has taught me how to face life, my dad Papá Pepe.
To my brother Juan, the one who although likes arguing away with me, I do appreciate so much.
To my oldest sister Mari who I consider as a second mother and source of my inspiration.
To my middle sister Lupe, the woman who is always in the best mood, the one who changes my mood with a single smile.
To my sister Sara, the person with the best sense of humor ever, the one filled with joy.
To my wise friend, the one who I lived unforgettable moments with, Mari Lu.
To the craziest girl in the world, Whom I consider more than a best friend my little sister, Tere.
To a very good friend, the one with the biggest smile, Erick
To a remarkable woman and coauthor of this work, Sofí.
To a very good friend, the adventurer of life, Sam
To the angel that God put in my way to light my path, Bicho.