Andrew
It is said that there was an English teacher named Andrew, who had always taught writing to the graduates. He was notorious for his words and deeds on the anniversary for the dead in the Wenchuan Earthquake. We stoped all the fun and mourned with deep grief at that time. While, he asked the monitor to show a movie. Although the monitor told him it was inadvisable and explained the reason, he still persisted in so doing. At last, they fell out.
Andrew got married. The bride was a graduate, may be one of his students. However, happiness didn't last long. One evening, some students saw he was crying at the door of dormitory because he couldn't find his wife.
When I heard of these things about Andrew, I didn't know how to judge.
I could not help imaging an old man crying in the corner on a chill night with only a glimmer. He was in sad shape after all.
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Andrew
It is said that there was an English teacher named Andrew, who had always taught writing to the graduates. He was notorious for his words and deeds on the anniversary for the dead in the Wenchuan Earthquake. At that time, we stopped all the fun and mourned with deep grief. During this time, he asked the monitor if he could show a movie. Although the monitor told him it was inadvisable and explained the reason, he still persisted in so doing. Eventually, they fell out.Andrew got married. The bride was a graduate, maybe one of his students. However, their happiness didn't last long. One evening, some students saw he was crying at the dormitory door because he couldn't find his wife.
When I heard of these things about Andrew, I didn't know how to judge him [or:what to think].
I could not help picturing (or: imagining) an old man crying in the corner on a chill night with only a glimmer [?]. He was in sad shape after all.
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in so doing. - I think I would prefer to use "in doing so".
'only a glimmer' - does you mean that he was in a dark place, perhaps with just a flickering candle for light?
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