First notebook entry: Introducing myself~~~~~~~~~~~~
My name is qi feng(祁枫).
You can call me allen , that is my english name.
I had finished my undergraduate courses this year and I'm going to get a postgraduate degree in Australia. I have applied for 3 unversities(UWA USYD ANU) and they all sent me a conditional-offer which says I have to get a band 6.5 for IELTS with no band less than 6.
At first I thought it was not difficult to pass the IELST test and yes, it is pretty easy for me to get points higher than 6.5 in reading listening and speaking but i have some problems in writing. I've got 5.5 in writing twice and that really drives me crazy!
Actually, the task of IELTS writing seems very simple, sometimes even ridiculous, for example "Children should stay in school until they are 18.Agree or dis agree.".I thought I'd had done my best but they just don't give me a 6.why~~~~T T
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself~~~~~~~~~~~~
My name is qi feng(祁枫).You can call me Allen, that's my English name.
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At first I thought it would not be difficult to pass the IELST test and yes, it is pretty easy for me to get points higher than 6.5 in reading listening and speaking but I have some problems in writing. I've got 5.5 in writing twice and that really drives me crazy! < I bet it does!
Actually, the task of IELTS writing seems very simple, sometimes even ridiculous. For example "Children should stay in school until they are 18. Agree or disagree.".I thought I'd had done my best but they just won't give me a 6....why?
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