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Freshy I'v been looking for a language partner for a while, and then I found italki. Guess I will settle down and start practicing. Well, people has all kinds of ways of improving their English. Mine doesn't work so well especially in writing. Maybe I should try the method of memorization? It's the only method I haven't try yet because some of my friends told me reading will do the same. Anyway, this notebook is really a good place to start, isn't it? Learning a language is a long journey, and I'm hoping in here with you guys, it will be more fun and courageous.

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Fresh Start (This means to start something new. I know "Freshy is your name, but this is a good title!)

I'v been looking for a language partner for a while, and then I found italki. I guess I will settle down and start practicing.
Well, people have all kinds of ways of improving their English. My way hasn't been working so well especially in my writing. Maybe I should try the method of memorization? It's the only method I haven't tried yet because some of my friends told me reading will have the same result.
Anyway, this notebook is really a good place to start, isn't it? YES!
Learning a language is a long journey, and I'm hoping that with your help here, it will be more fun than before.

Great start!  You're a very very high intermediate / advanced writer! 
 
Red                  = Capitalization
Blue                 =  Correction and Spelling
Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common
Purple               =  My comment or suggestion     
Underline          = Punctuation and/ or  spacing
 

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