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Influence of the Enternet on University Students As we all know,Internet was more and more popular among the university students.Not only does it make a big difference in students' study,but also play a important role in students's daily life. On the one hand,some people think it take advantage to students' study.only can it broaden students' views without go out,but also convenient to students in,finding some related information.On the other hand,others feel it take disadvantage to students' study.As the students take a lot of time in playing computer games,they always forget to study.Then,more and more unhealthy imformation in the internet may lead students to wrorry way. From my perspective,I think it useful to student's in their study.Only if they make a balance between playing and studying,they will take full use of internet. ps.This composition is my homework.Could you give me some advice to my writing?

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Influence of the Internet on University Students

As we all know, the Internet is more and more popular among the university students.  Not only does it make a big difference in students' studies,  but it also plays an important role in a student's's daily life.
On the one hand,  some people think it take is an advantage for students' studies.  Not only can it broaden students' views without going out,  but it is also convenient for students in finding to find some related information.  On the other hand,  others feel it take is a disadvantage to students' studies.  As the students take [we often say "spend" instead of "take"] a lot of time in playing computer games,  they always forget to study.  Then,  more and more unhealthy information in on the internet may lead students to wrorry [I'm not sure here] way.
From my perspective,  I think it is useful to a student's studies.  If only they would find make a balance between playing and studying,  they could make full use of the internet.

ps.This composition is my homework.  Could you give me some advice to my writing?

Make sure you put spaces after using a period [.] or a comma [,] 
Good job!

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