hallo, ich habe Ihren Aufsatz durchgelesen und es gibt einige Fehler darin.. das ist wahrscheinlich wegen Ihrer Muttersprache, z.b. die Satzstruktur oder sowas in der art, klingen einbisschen wie Deutsch. also Sie sind Pilot? Das ist wunderbar also mein Vater ist polizist, dort haben sie auch Hubschrauber, also darf ich Sie als Freund zufuegen, damit wir kontakt beim Spachlernen leichter machen koennen. viel Glueck!! Hans

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Capitalize the pronoun "I" Examples: He asked me where I had bought my jacket. If I see her, I will give her your message.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize proper nouns Examples: I visited California on my vacation. She gave Peter a present for his birthday. There are many special rules concerning proper nouns. Generally, Proper nouns refer to specific people, places, things, pets, organizations, etc. Remember to always capitalize the name of someone or something. Here are some specific rules to follow: • Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. Correct Examples: My friend lives in South Carolina. We are planning a vacation in South Africa. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` • Capitalize the group name of members of an organization Examples: The Neighborhood Players are presenting a musical next week. Some Washington Democrats would like to see the company up. • Capitalize company trademarks (product names) Examples: My niece loves Converse shoes. Do you prefer Siesta or Aloha products?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` • Capitalize common names of periods of time in history Examples: The Psychedelic Sixties were pretty groovy baby! The Dot Com Era lasted far shorter than many people expected.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ • Capitalize specific events Examples: I went to the Tomato Growers Conference in Salinas last weekend. Have you ever attended the Technoland Convergence Festival?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` • Capitalize acronyms which refer to specific names Examples: I prefer to watch PBS tv whenever possible. The ICAM commissioned a study on OBLOG.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` • Common nouns may be capitalized when used as names for the entire class of something. Example: Some feel that Man is destined for outerspace! • Names of gods are capitalized, including Allah, Vishnu, and God. The word god is generally not capitalized if it is use

Please remove this post (go to "Notebook" and then "My Notebook" and click on the little x next to this entry. Then - read what I sent you about capitalization including the examples here. Then correct what you can of the capitalization in this entry and resubmit it. I just can't correct 20+ "i"'s all over again. After you resubmit it, I'll be happy to check it for you. Just let me know it's re-posted. I'm not being rude - it's just that your English is nearly fluent so I suspect working on speaking ability isn't urgent for you ........and if I correct, I correct everything - please humor me (you'll be glad you learned it). I promise.~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry Roses are red Violets are blue I think I said He's in love with you! • Capitalization Rules ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize the first word of a sentence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` >>>>>>>>>> Capitalize the pronoun "I"<<<<<<<<<<< ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize proper nouns : persons, places / things, names of people ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~• Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize days of the week, holidays, and months of the year. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`Do not capitalize seasons. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize countries, languages, and nationalities (adjective form of a specific country) Capitalize titles that come before names. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`Do not capitalize titles that follow names. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize letter salutations (openings) and closings `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` Capitalize the first word in a quote. `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize content words in titles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize the first word of a sentence Examples: There is something wrong with this cheese. Strange things have happened recently.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~