Something about myself hello, i´m matthias. i´m living in germany, exactly in hambühren, close to celle, which is located between hanover and hamburg. of corse, it´s a lot of closer to hanover t

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Something about myself hello, i´m matthias. i´m living in germany, exactly in hambühren, close to celle, which is located between hanover and hamburg. of corse, it´s a lot of closer to hanover than to hamburg ;-) i´m 39 years old and an soldier of the german army. i have been trained as a helicopter pilot, and now i´m going to improve my english. presently i´m taking part of an english training course. it takes only 4 week, will train the basic, so that i have to do something additionally by my own in my leisuretime. my problems are sometimes the decisions of using the "going to" or "will"- forms. one of the others should be mentioned, that i although have to improve my pronounciation and of course my abilities in conversation.

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Something about myself

hello,

i'm Matthias.

i'm living in germany, exactly in hambühren, close to celle, which is located between Hanover and Hamburg. of corse, it´s ~~a lot of~~ much closer to hanover than to hamburg ;-)

i'm 39 years old and an soldier of the german army.

i have been trained as a helicopter pilot, and now i´m going to improve my english. presently i´m taking part of an english training course. it takes only 4 weeks, will ~~train~~teach the basic, so that i have to do something additionally by my own in my leisuretime.

my problems are sometimes the decisions of using the "going to" or "will"- forms.

one of the others should be mentioned, that i ~~although~~also have to improve my pronounciation and of course my abilities in conversations.

i am not a native english speaker,hope it can help you!O(∩_∩)O

Capitalization Rules ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize the first word of a sentence ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` >>>>>>>>>> Capitalize the pronoun "I"<<<<<<<<<<< ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize proper nouns : persons, places / things, names of people ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~• Capitalize North, South, East, and West when contained in the name of a place (state, country, etc.) but not when used for giving directions. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize days of the week, holidays, and months of the year. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`Do not capitalize seasons. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Capitalize countries, languages, and nationalities (adjective form of a specific country) Capitalize titles that come before names. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`Do not capitalize titles that follow names. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize letter salutations (openings) and closings `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`` Capitalize the first word in a quote. `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize content words in titles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` Capitalize the first word in each line of poetry `~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

Something About Myself

Hello,

I'm Matthias.

I'm living in Germany, more exactly in Hambühren, close to Celle, which is located between Hanover and Hamburg. Of corse, it´s a lot of closer to Hanover than to Hamburg ;-)

I'm 39 years old and an soldier in the German army.

I have been trained as a helicopter pilot, and now I´m going to improve my English. At present, I´m taking part of an English training course. It takes only 4 weeks and I will train the basic group so that I have something to do in my own in my leisure time.

My problems is sometimes I have difficulty knowing when to use "going to" or "will".

One of the other things I should be mentioned,is that I also need to improve my pronounciation and of course my English speaking ability.

Hello Matthais! So very nice to meet you. You know, I've never been in a helicopter before...
Well, take a look at your essay. What do you see right away. Alot of RED. This made me pretty crazy because you need to learn proper capitalization immediately. Clearly you're nearly fluent in English - and need very little help from me, but you do make the same small mistakes MANY TIMES and you need to learn to correct these mistakes (because I was kind enough to correct every single one! ha ha). Okay? There are a few sentences that simply needed the more natural way to say - don't worry about that, you pick that up as you study. Right now, focus on #1 capitalization (yes it matters) and prepositions / conjunctions. (of, to, at, for) and plurals..."it' only takes 4 weeks"<<<. More than one week = +s. Keep up the great work and I hope you write more and do much better on CAPITALIZATION. (wink wink)

Red = Capitalization

Blue = Correction and Spelling

Green = A more natural way to say / more common

Purple = My comment or suggestion

Underline = Punctuation and/ or spacing

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