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Why there are dictatorships in the world Recently,North Korea's dictator Kim Jung Un executed his uncle fast because of coup scheme.I can't understand why this man are cruel.Human right in this country never exist ,there are so many political prisoners being throw into the concentrate camp.From the beginning of this man's govern,I have heard many executions happened in this impoverished country.Beast !I pray this regime will be subverted one day and this man and his followers be punished for their evil,How beautiful the world,when this day come!Do you agree with me !Hope talk with you from the bottom of my heart!

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Why there are are there dictatorships in the world? (is this a question?)

 

Recently, North Korea's dictator Kim Jung Un executed his uncle fast because he was planning a coup scheme. I can't understand why this man are is so cruel. Human right in this country have never existed, there are so many political prisoners being thrown into the concentration camps.

From the beginning of this man's government,I have heard about many executions happened in this impoverished country.

Beast! I pray this regime will be subverted one day and this man and his followers be punished for their evil. How beautiful the world will be, when this day comes! Do you agree with me?

I hope I can talk with you from the bottom of my heart!

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