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Complaining about the delaying of front-of-pack traffic-light labels. (Letter)
(This is a homework I have to do for school. I thought it was really complicated and I hope you'll help me make this make sense :))
Wallmart
AL PHENIX CITY
3700 HWY 280/431 N.
The Coca-Cola Company
P.O. Box 1734
Atlanta, GA 30301
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter because the delays we experienced with your service caused the loss of many of our customers. Our turnover has been reduced by 10 percent in one month because you didn't send us the front-of-pack traffic-light labels that you promised us. Without any reply or new delivery within two weeks, we will have to ask for a full refund.
As we have been working for several years with your company, we are very dispointed and would regret that this problem could put an end to our trade relations. Of course, you might understand the reasons why, if this misunderstanding is not set in a few weeks, we won't be doing further business with you.
I hope you will include our complaints to your production department so that we can continue working together.
Yours faithfully.
Complaining about the delaying of front-of-pack traffic-light labels. (Letter)
(This is a homework I have to do for school. I thought it was really complicated and I hope you'll help me make this make sense :))
Wallmart
AL PHENIX CITY
3700 HWY 280/431 N.
The Coca-Cola Company
P.O. Box 1734
Atlanta, GA 30301
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter because of the delays you forced on us to which caused the loss of many of our customers. Our turnover has been reduce reduced by 10 pourcents percent in a months month because you didn't send us the front-of-pack traffic-light labels that you promised us. Without any reply or new delivery within two weeks, we will have to ask for a full refund.
As we have been working for several years with your company, we are very dispointed disappointed, and would regret that this mishaps mishap could put an end to our trade relations [editor's note: The grammar is correct, but personally, instead of "trade relations," I would say "business relationship."]. Of course, We hope you might understand the our reasons why. If this misunderstanding is not set addressed in a few weeks, we won't do further business with you.
I hope you will include forward our complains complaints to your production department so that we can keep on work continue working together.
Yours faithfully.
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