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Began winter I dont like winter season. because it's so boring and depressive. In fact Im depressed all the time. But I feel better when summer. The sea, sand and sun makes me very happy. For my life is getting more liveable. It didnt stop snowing since last night. I woke up was white everywhere. This made me happy, but the snow will be melted mud everywhere.. so get back to summer.

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Began winter

I dont like winter season. because it's so boring and depressing. In fact, Im depressed all the time. However, I feel better when summer. The sea, sand and sun makes me very happy. For My life is getting more liveable. It didn't stop snowing since last night. I woke up was white everywhere. This made me happy, but the snow will be melted mud everywhere.. so get back to summer.

 

[Good work.  I'm not sure I interpreted 'For my life...'.  It might have been 'Because my life is getting more liveable', but the meaning would still be unclear.]

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Began winter

I dont like winter season. because it's so boring and depressive. In fact Im depressed all the time. But I feel better when summer. The sea, sand and sun makes me very happy. For my life is getting more liveable. It didnt stop snowing since last night. I woke up was white everywhere. This made me happy, but the snow will be melted mud everywhere.. so get back to summer.

 

Winter has come.

I don't like the winter, it's so boring and it makes me depressed. I much prefer the summer. The sun, sea and sand make me happy and feel like life is more liveable. It hasn't stopped snowing since last night. I woke up this morning and everything was white. I do like the snow, but when it melts there's just slush everywhere.. so bring on the summer.

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Began Winter Begins


I don't like the winter season. because It's so boring and depressive. In fact, I'm depressed all the time. But However, summer makes me I feel better when summer. The sea, sand and the sun makes cheers me up greatly very happy. For My life is getting more bearable liveable. It didnt stop snowed ing since all night last night. I woke up was with white everywhere. This made me happy, but soon the snow will be melted and sloshy mud everywhere... so get back to Now let's talk about summer instead...

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Began winter

I don't like winter season because it's so boring and depressing ve. In fact I am depressed all the time. But I feel better when during summer. The sea, sand and sun makes me very happy. For My life is getting becomes more lively able. It did'nt stop snowing since last night. When I woke up it was white everywhere. This made me happy, but the snow will be melted and there will be mud everywhere.. so get back to summer.

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Winter Begin

I don't like winter season, because it's so boring and depressive. In fact I'm depressed all the time. But I feel better when in summer. The sea, sand and sun makes me very happy. For My life is getting more liveable. It didn't stop snowing since last night. When I woke up, it was white everywhere. This(It) made me happy, but the snow will be melted into the mud everywhere.. so my mind go get back to summer already.

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