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Nov 11 I'm unhappy today as someting caused me trouble. The weather is gray and it put me in downhearted mood too. I will put down my step to have a rest.

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Nov 11

I'm unhappy today because something has caused me some  trouble. In addition, the weather is gloomy and it put me in a bad mood. too. I will put down my stuff now and take a rest.

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Nov 11

Something happened today to upset me. The weather is also bad and this has made my down hearted mood worse. I am going to put down my head and have a rest.
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Nov 11

I'm unhappy today as someting caused me trouble. The weather is gray and it put me in downhearted mood too. I will slow down my step to have a rest.

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