My classmates

Jessica is a friendly girl. I met her in my English class in New Oriental school. She sits next to me. She is much taller than me as she works as a model. She will go to Manhattan for a fashion show next Month, but she can only speak a little English. So she comes to learn English. She will stay in the states for about three months. So she can't won't be able to celebrate the Chinese New Year with her family. Gene is another classmate in my English class. He is a young boy who comes from Hebei province. He is a golf player1*. He comes here to learn English because he wants to enrich himself. His English is a little better than Jessica and he studies hard. He says he is leaving for Hainan next month. Maybe*2 there is a golf play competition*3 I guess*2.

1* more usual 'he plays golf' or 'he is a golfer' but this maybe needs a clear context.

2* 'Maybe' or 'I guess' but both sound strange.

3* I don't play golf - I'm not sure if you call it a match. Maybe someone else can correct this better.

Well corrected. Clearly expressed.