我的大学校生活

今天晚早上我九点半起床。我只吃了一点儿因为必须去学校学准备数学考试。三点以前，我学了很多因为这个考试很重要。我跟同学问老师是否能帮我们。两点三刻我去上英国文学课。下课后，我会来图书馆学准备考试。晚上六点我有数学考试。下课后，我回家。我现在很累，可是我必须写一个英国文学报告。 这个学期我有三门课，可是我有时候很忙。希望我能休息。我应该回班回教室了。再见。

Hi Jose,

I am happy to help you with Chinese.

In your title I got confused with "大学校". In Chinese we don't say like that. We use either "大学" (university/college) or "学校" (school).

In the first sentence, you wrote you get up in "晚上" (evening), which doesn't make sense. Are you trying to say "早上" (morning)？

The second sentence is not very understandable though it is correct in grammar. You used "因为" but the fact that you ate a little (for breakfast) ("我吃一点儿") and that you had to go to school for the math exam (“必须去学校准备数学考试”) do not seem to have a logical relationship (prepare for the exam=准备考试，take an exam=参加考试, we don't say 学考试). If you want to say that you ate ONLY a little for breakfast (maybe because you are in a rush to school), you can add "只" (only) before the verb to make it more clear. Also in Chinese, one of the usages of character "了" is to form the past tense or the perfect tense (i.e. did or have done sth.). Without this, your sentence would be like: "I eat a little because ..." even though you indicated a time in the past.

"我学习很多" is a direct translation of "I study much". If you want to say "I studied much" you can add "了" after the verb. Also, in China people add 很 before an adjective if this adjective is a description. (i.e. XXX is/are +adj.)

e.g. we usually say 学校很大 in Chinese instead of 学校大 when we want to express that "the school is large" without "very" in English.

"我跟同学问老师能帮我们。" doesn't make sense in Chinese. I guess you wanted to say:

我问同学，老师是否能帮我们。I ask my classmates if the teacher can help us.

“是否能” = if/whether sb. can, you can also say "是不是能" or "能不能" or "能否" instead.

"回班" is not a common used phrase. If you mean "go back to class" you can say more clearly like "回到班上" or “回到教室” (go back to the classroom). I would also suggest a "了" be added after that. It is used to express the state right now. e.g. 我要走了 (I’m going now) v.s. 我要走（I want to go） 

Hope that helps.

我的大学校生活

今天晚上？我九点半起床。我只吃了一点儿因为我必须去学校参加数学考试。我学到三点左右，我学了很多，因为这个考试很重要。我跟同学寻求老师的帮助。两点四十五分，我去上英国文学课。下课后，我会来图书馆准备考试。晚上六点我有数学考试。下课后，我回家。我现在很累，可是我必须写一个英国文学报告。 这个学期我有三门课，可是我有时候很忙。希望我能休息。我应该会吧。再见。

我的大学校生活

今天早上我九点半起床。我只吃了一点儿，因为必须去参加学数学考试。三点以前，我学很多因为这个考试重要。我跟同学问老师能帮我们。两点三刻我去上英国文学课。下课后，我会来图书馆学考试。晚上六点我有数学考试。下课后，我回家。我现在很累，可是我必须写一个英国文学报告。 这个学期我有三门课，可是我有时候很忙。希望我能休息。我应该回班。再见。

我的大学校生活

今天晚上我九点半起床。我吃一点儿因为必须去学校学数学考试。三点以前，我学很多因为这个考试重要。我跟同学问老师能帮我们。两点三刻我去上英国文学课。下课后，我会来图书馆学考试。晚上六点我有数学考试。下课后，我回家。我现在很累，可是我必须写一个英国文学报告。 这个学期我有三门课，可是我有时候很忙。希望我能休息。我应该回班。再见。

我的大学生活

今天早晨我九点半起床。因为我吃一点儿必须去学校参加数学考试。下午三点以前，我又学了很多，因为这个考试很重要。我和同学一起向老师寻求帮助。两点三刻，我去上英国文学课。课后，去图书馆准备考试资料。晚上六点还有数学考试。考完后，我就回家了。我现在很累，但是我还要写一个英国文学报告。这个学期我只有三门课，但是有时候却很忙。我希望自己能够休息一会儿。我还要上班，再见。

my university life

today,i got up at 9:30am,because i had to go to school to attend a math test after eating a less.i had learned a lot before 3pm,because the test was important.my classmates and i ask teacher for help.at 2:15pm,i went attend the course of english literature. i went to library to prepare next test after class.i went home after finishing math test. i'm so tired,but i have to write a english literature reports

although i only have three subjects this term,i'm busy than anytime.i wish I could take a break. I have to go to work, goodbye.