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Welcome
Hi! This is my first notebook. I'm from Palma de Mallorca (Spain). I'm teacher but, at this moment, I haven't any job work. I don't know if people from in others contries you know about the situation of in Spain. We have a large economic crisis and many people don't have a job work and we have many families that they have lost your their houses because they can't pay your afford mortgages to pay.
This situation is depressing because in the TV we only see corruption of politican the Corrupt politicians and people in the street asking for a food. This is the society that we have created, corruption of politican that has the Corrupt politicians united themselves in these with crisis and the rest of people must bear the disadvantaged of are the working class!!
I am not native English speaker so I'd like to see a correction from Native English person.
I hear about the situation in Spain. Sadly, always poor people suffer from the corruption. I hope you and your people can pass these crisis .
All the best,
Welcome
Hi! This is my first notebook. I'm from Palma de Mallorca (Spain). I'm a teacher but, at this moment, I don't have work/a job/employment. I don't know if in others countries you know about the situation of in Spain where we have a large serious/severe economic crisis and many people don't have work/are unemployed and we have many families that they have lost your their house/home because they can't pay your their mortgages.
This situation is depressing because on the TV we only always see the corruption of politican and people in the street asking for a food. This is the society that we have created, corruption of politicans that has united combined with the financial crisis, and the disadvantaged are as always the working class!!
Welcome
Hi! This is my first notebook entry. I'm from Palma de Mallorca (Spain). I'm a teacher but, at this moment, I haven't work don't have a job. I don't know if in others contries you know about the situation of in Spain in other countries. We have a large economic crisis, many people don't have work are unemployed and we have many familyfamilies that they have lost your their houses because they can't pay your their mortgages.
This situation is depressing because in on the TV, we only see corruption of politican all we see are corrupt politicians and people in the street asking for a food. This is the society that we have created; , corruption of politican corrupt politicians that has have united with crisis and the disadvantaged are the at the working class expense!!
The purple part is hard for me to correct, because I don't fully understand what you mean.
Good text. I hope the situation improves in Spain soon!
Best/Eleonor
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