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Coming home
Today, like every friday, I come home with to my family. In a few hours I'll go to Sants station and I'll take the train. It's boring because I have an hour and half until I arrive at home and I won't have the had dinner yet, so I'm thinking of about eatting something in some a fast food restaurant or something like that.
I'll go in the train with one of my flatemates that is from my city, but I don't think that we will talk about anything because I see him every day and we don't have nothing anything new to explain us talk about. Maybe, I'll be with my MP4 and he with his mobile, showing me photos about of his drawings and pictures, because he's studying Arts at the university and he likes to show me all that he does. Normally, he asks me for my opinion and I say which things doesn't I don't like me about colors or technique.
A long time ago, I said told him if he could dessing give me my a tattoo, but at in the end he didn't do it. Nowadays, I want to a tattoo me, but I am a bit short of money. Moreover, I have to be really sure that of what I want because it will be there for the rest of my life and the tattoo have has to have a special meaning for me.
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Coming home
Today, like every Friday, I come go ['come' means you are living in the place where your other family resides. So this statement makes no sense. 'Go' means that you are living somewhere else (like the university dorm) and is returning for the weekend to the place where your family lives. "I come home everday from work tired but my face lighted up whenever a nice dinner is already prepared and a nice hot bath waiting for me". In this sentence, it is OK to use 'go'. This means that you are talking from the office. The meaning of using 'come' means that you are already at your home when you described this sentiment to someone] home with to my family. In few hours, I'll go to be at the Sants Station and I'll taking the train. It's boring because I have an hour and half to kill until I befire arriving at home. and I don't have the dinner yet. So, I'll be thinking of eat something to grab [this is more colloquial because of your essay tone. "to eat" will be a bit more formal] in some fast food restaurant or something like that.
I'll go in the train with One of my flatemates that who is from my the same city will be sharing the same ride but, I don't think that we talk about anything we'll be chatting much since because I see him every day and we don't have there is nothing new to talk about explain us. Maybe, I'll be with my MP4 and he with his mobile trying to showing me photos about of his drawings and pictures. because You see, he's studying the arts at the university and he likes to show me all that he does his stuff. Normally, he asks me for my opinion and I say which things doesn't like me about constructively criticizes the colors or the technique.
Long time agoA while back, I said told him if he could dessing design a me my tattoo for me but at in the end he didn't do it. Nowadays, I wanted a to tattoo me, but I am a bit short of money. Moreover, I have to be really sure if it is the right one for me that what I want because since it will be on me for the rest of my life and the tattoo it must have to have a speacial special meaning for me.
Get a fake one. Every stage of your life, you will view it differently. At least this way, you can always change according to your moods. Getting something like this permanently on your body is not in my books.
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