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Waiting for winter. I noticed that I've not written for a long time in my notebook here. And today I just decided to write about...weather. To be more precisely, I want to write about winter. It's my favorite season in the year! At first, I like Christmas and New Year's atmosphere, I like shining garlands in streets, cold wind and strong snowfall. May be it sounds strange, but I really like cold, it's better than heat for me. And probably you've heard what means "winter" in Russia. But I don't know what to wait from winter this year. We had the first snow in September! And that October and the beginning of November were very warm for this time of the year. I know that last couple years our winter was without snow and it was rainy every day, but I hope this year will be snowy enough and I'll enjoy my favorite season looking in window. And do you like winter? What the weather at this time in your country like?

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Waiting for Winter

 

I noticed that I have not written for a long time in my notebook here. And Today I had just decided to write about something - the ...weather. To be more precisely, I want to write about winter.
It's This is my favorite season in the year! At First of all, I like the coming Christmas and New Year's atmosphere. I like the shining garlands hanging up in streets, the cold wind blowing and strong snowfall falling in great intensity. [adding these extra words make your essay more vivid.  You are not writing a report] May be Perhaps ["maybe" and "may be" have different meanings.  Also "perhaps" is formal sounding] it sounds strange, but I really like the cold, it's much better than the sweltering heat for me. And Most probably you have heard of what mean"winter" means in Russia. But I don't know what to wait expect from winter this year. However, we had the first snow in September! And that In October too! and Incredibly, now in the beginning of November were it is very warm for this time of the year. 


I know remembered that the last couple years, our winters was without snow and it was rained every day. but I hope this year will be snowy enough and I'll to enjoy my favorite season by peering through looking in the window.

And Do you like winter? What is the weather like at this time in your country like?

 

In Southern California, great sunshine in the day but freezing (to us) during the night.  It rarely rains on Christmas.  During noon and early afternoon, it is still possible to go to the beach for a tan!

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I also like winter because of white snow, and I think white color is the best in out of all colors(just in my opinion). Anyway, good luck to you this winter.

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