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What a day! Today, I woke up late. It was 6:15am and I was supposed to get up at 5:30. Anyway, I took a shower and went to school. I was carrying a lot of stuff: my backpack (that weighs like 40kilos ;D) and my laptop with all accesories, mouse, keyboard, charger, etc. (Might sound weird carrying a keyboard, but my laptop recently had a system breakdown or something like that, so I have to use a keyboard aside). So, then I got to the bus stop and waited for like half and hour... good! Until it finally came. I got to school a little late. First class was French Linguistics, my favorite subject with the most incredible teacher ever. Every girl in school has a crush on him, but I don't like him in that kind of way, it's simply a good teacher. So, at the end of the class, I asked him if he could be my tutor and give me classes outside school... he looked at me as if I had said that I was going to kill him, and he answered: that's illegal. I was like: come on! it's not like I'm going to rape you! It was so embarrasing! Having all my classmates looking at me and laughing wasn't cool. I wonder if things between us will get uncomfortable. The next class was history. I carried my laptop because I was supposed to give a class about Education in the United Kingdom, but the teacher told me that she forgot that there was someone before me, so I had to wait until next class that's on Friday. So... I carried my laptop in vain. After school, I go to work from 1pm to 5:30. I get out of school at 12:20 so I have 40 minutes to get to work. Today, I arrived to the bus stop and waited for 15 minutes. I was getting really anxious, but then I saw the bus coming and I calmed down. 5 minutes later, I realized that I had forgot my laptop at school. I was freaking out! I called a friend and luckily he saved it for me (what happens when your mind isn't where it is supposed to be) u.u Then, while I was still mad and sad, I started realizing that the bus driver wasn't taking the same route as it always does. I got nervous, so I asked a lady beside me: do you know what's the name of this bus? ( here in Mérida, Yucatán all buses have names regarding the place where it takes you). She answered: it's San Lucas. OH MY GOD! I TOOK THE WRONG BUS... HOW COULD THAT HAPPENED? It was already late... 1:10pm to be precise. I got off the bus and walk to work for 25 minutes. Fortunately, my boss didn't lecture me about being on time. Besides all that happened, I kept smiling! Have a nice day!

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What a day!

Today, I woke up late. It was 6:15am and I was supposed to get up at 5:30. Anyway, I took a shower and went to school. I was carrying a lot of stuff: my backpack (that weighs like 40 kilos ;D) and my laptop with all accesories - mouse, keyboard, charger, etc. (Might sound weird carrying a keyboard, but my laptop recently had a system breakdown or something like that, so I have to use a keyboard aside). So, then I got to the bus stop and waited for like half and hour... good! Until it finally came. I got to school a little late.

First class was French Linguistics, my favorite subject with the most incredible teacher ever. Every girl in school has a crush on him, but I don't like him in that kind of way, he's simply a good teacher. So, at the end of the class, I asked him if he could be my tutor and give me classes outside school... he looked at me as if I had said that I was going to kill him, and he answered, "That's illegal." I was like: come on! It's not like I'm going to rape you! It was so embarrasing! Having all my classmates looking at me and laughing wasn't cool. I wonder if things between us will get uncomfortable.

The next class was history. I carried my laptop because I was supposed to give a class about Education in the United Kingdom, but the teacher told me that she forgot that there was someone before me, so I had to wait until next class that's on Friday. So... I carried my laptop in vain.

After school, I go to work from 1pm to 5:30. I get out of school at 12:20, so I have 40 minutes to get to work. Today, I arrived to the bus stop and waited for 15 minutes. I was getting really anxious, but then I saw the bus coming and I calmed down. 5 minutes later, I realized that I had forgot my laptop at school. I was freaking out! I called a friend and luckily he saved it for me (what happens when your mind isn't where it is supposed to be) u.u Then, while I was still mad and sad, I started realizing that the bus driver wasn't taking the same route as he always does. I got nervous, so I asked a lady beside me, "Do you know what's the name of this bus?" ( here in Mérida, Yucatán all buses have names regarding the place where it takes you). She answered: it's San Lucas.
OH MY GOD! I TOOK THE WRONG BUS... HOW COULD THAT HAPPEN?
It was already late... 1:10pm to be precise. I got off the bus and walk to work for 25 minutes. Fortunately, my boss didn't lecture me about being on time.

Besides all that happened, I kept smiling!

 

[Excellent work.  As a one-time teacher myself, I agree with the teacher, though probably not with the same high emotion.  Being paid to tutor a student you are giving a grade to is a definite conflict of interest.  Also, being along with a female student in a tutuoring session, one who is taking his class, would be brought into question by his department.  You shouldn't feel too embarrassed - it would be natural to seed tutoring from someone you trust.  However, it is not advisable, for the reasons I stated.]

Have a nice day!

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