Irene’s diary

On Monday I saw a nice, (You need to choose what word or words you want to use either “nice” or “very nice” but not both) very nice man. I was very interested in you him (You would not say interested in you, that’s incorrect). So I decided to hint something to him flirt with him (Hint something to him does not make sense, it would be best to say flirt with him. Flirt means to behave in an amusing way to attract a girlfriend, or boyfriend). We started to have a little chat in the tube, so I asked him to go out with me.
Next weekend we went to the lake outside the city, then went to a restaurant. (It’s best to say “went to a restaurant because you talk about a restaurant in the next sentence.)  
We had dinner in a very nice Italian restaurant, the food was good, and the service was too. (The reader needs to know what at the Italian restaurant was good in this case the food and the service.)
We took had (took is the incorrect verb, it should be had) a typical first course (The word order needs to be changed so the sentence is clear) Italian dish: pasta with sea food seafood (In English seafood is one word). And the problem occurred with the first dish. happened during first dish. (“Occurred with the first dish” makes better sense than “happed during the first dish”)
While we was were (Was is the wrong verb, it should be were) eating he asked me to kiss him, but my mouth was full of bread. When my mouth was empty, he was kissing another woman.
I scream: “You are a playboy!”
He replied: “But she is my sister!”
I saw  looked (Saw is the wrong verb it should be looked) in the mirror and my face was completely red.
While we were finishing to eat our food (To eat is the wrong verb phrase it should be our food instead) the bill arrived. He seemed like (A gentleman is not enough information you need to add the word “like” before the “a”) a gentleman, therefore he and (You just need “and” here. “Therefore he” is grammatically incorrect and not needed) paid all. After dinner (You need to add more information here, after you did what you went to a coffee shop. “After dinner we went to a coffee shop.”) we went to a coffee shop, and (What did you take to the coffee shop with you? We went to the coffee shop and took a bottle of wine.) took a bottle of wine.
In the meanwhile While (In the meanwhile does not make sense, instead put “while) we were drinking, he asked me to kiss him, but my mouth was full of wine. When my mouth was empty, he was kissing another woman.
I scream: “Is this your sister too?”
He replied: “No, I’m a playboy!”
It’s so hard to find a gentleman and not playboy mana playboy (Playboy man is incorrect). Many men often seem very interested in you me (You is incorrect and should be “me” instead), but they are really interested in having any girlfriend.
When I arrived at (At is not needed) home, I saw some flowers on the table with a message.
The message was said (Said is the better word to use here): “I love you”.
While I was smiling for from reading (For is incorrect and should be “from reading” instead) the message, my neighbor entered in (In is not needed) the home.
“Irene!” she said “You are in my home! Did you drink wine again?”