Childhood of Today

I think that present Childhood nowdays is very different from that of 30 thirty years ago. In the past, Not so many there wasn't so variety of toys were available then.as now. It was typical for children to go out into the streets and play ball games with your friends to football, to baseball; to play hide and seek; rope skipping the rope, bicycling... It was a childhood that has more sociable interactions and the children being more active. Also, you Then they may spending spent more quality time with your family members playing board games at home. But now, the most Nowadays, it is a common sight to see them is play alone to computer games in solitude for a couple of hours and lazing sitting on the sofa. So children don't move and are They are are not active and become unnon-sociable. For this reason, I think believe that it is a good idea is to register enroll them in extracurricular activities, is good!  

Be more assertive in your writing :)

Childhood

I think that present childhood is very different from 30 years ago. In the past, there wasn't as large a variety of toys as now. It was typical to go to the street and get together with your friends to play football, to baseball, to hide and seek, skipping the rope, cycling... It was a childhood more sociable and more active. Also, you spent more time with your family playing board games at home. But now, the most common pasttime is play alone to computer games a couple of hours, sitting on the sofa, so children don't move and are unsociable. For this reason, I think that a good idea is to register them in extracurricular activities, is good!

[Good work.  Your point is well made.  I see too many pictures of people in the same room just texting somebody else and not noticing who else is in the room with them.]

Childhood

I think that childhood today is very different than 30 years ago. In the past, there wasn't as much of a variety of toys as there is now.  It was typical to play football, baseball, hide and seek, jump rope, cycling, etc.   Childhood was more sociable and more active.  Also, you spent more time with your family playing board games at home. But now, the most common thing to do is play computer games a couple of hours while sitting on the sofa. So children don't move and are unsociable. For this reason, I think it is a good idea to register them in extracurricular activities!

Cristina, what you wrote is pretty good.  I undestood your points.  This is just another way of writing it. They also spend a lot of time on their cell phones too here in the United States. :)  Al