2013.10.25

Today, it was the first time that i had gone I went to the Canton Fair for the first time... I thought it would be wonderful and interesting, and I thought I would be brave to and talk to foreign people. But in fact, when I went there, they needed to work, so I have had to look around there by myself. Sure, there were lots of interesting and creative things, however, there were some boring and ordinary things as well. The saddest thing was that I did not dare to enter the store, because I look like a student and not like a purchasing agent customer (although I really is am a student, and I came there just want to visit). And Some foreign people came into the store, but I do did not dare to talk with them. Maybe it's not better than i thought wasnt as good as I thought it would be, but it broadened my horizons, and let me see the difference between the translator and me myself. I hope I will be brave next time...

Notes:

- "I" should always be written with a capital letter, not just at the beginning of sentences.

Excellent work! You should have more confidence, your English sounds very natural. Next time go for it! 加油！