Autumn

Finally autumn comes. is here after a long hot summer.,it finally comes. I like autumn,_as the leaves will be turn into a beautiful yellow,it would be very beautiful. I like to see that the leaves them fly in the wind. But However, these days,_it turns the weather becomes colder and colder and the skies, cloudy and windy. Today,_I saw a girl even warm in her most heavily padded winter jacket. The weather is always strange here in the north eastern part of China. We seem to go Autumn seemed to be skipped with winter jumping onto us directly straight from summer . No autumn and no spring. I hate this that.

Autumn

Autumn comes. After a long hot summer, it finally comes. I like autumn, as the leaves will be yellow, and it will be very beautiful. I like to see that the leaves fly in the wind, but these days, it turns colder and colder. Cloudy and windy. Today, I even saw a girl even wearing a wadded-jacket. The weather is always strange here in the northeast of China. We seem to go winter directly from summer. No autumn, no spring. I hate that.

[Good work.  Remember to put a space after all periods and commas, not before.  We say that some country is northeast of China, but talk about something being IN THE northeast (area) of China.]

Autumn

Autumn comes. After a long hot summer,it finally comes. I like autumn,as the leaves will be (you could say "as the leaves turn yellow") yellow,it would will be very beautiful. I like to see that the leaves fly in the wind. But these days,it turns colder and colder. Cloudy and windy. Today,I saw a girl even warn wear a wadded-jacket. The weather is always strange here in North-east of China. We seem to go to winter directly from summer.No autumn,no spring. I hate that.