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Tonight I met him again Tonight I met him again,suddenly,without preparation. It was a little dine together with friends.Who know we would have dinner in the same resterant. I can't breathe when his friends call his name.And I didn't myself when my friend besides me called him turned his head.So happy he is now,so different condition I guessed. And his new girlfriend who more beautiful and more gentle,are sitting arrounds him. I couldn't think anything now,in a word.

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Tonight I met him again

Tonight I met him again,suddenly,without preparation.
It was a little dine together with friends.Who know we would have dinner in the same resterant.
I can't breathe when his friends call his name.And I didn't myself when my friend besides me called him turned his head.So happy he is now,so different condition I guessed.
And his new girlfriend who more beautiful and more gentle,are sitting arrounds him.
I couldn't think anything now,in a word.

 

1. dinner

2. restaurant

3. You suddenly changed from past to present tense.  Try "I couldn't breathe when his friends called his name."

4. him and he turned

5. Try: "He is so happy now.  This is so different than when I saw him last."

6. who is more beautiful

7. is sitting beside him

 

This is beautiful :D  I have so been there :D

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