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Tonight I met him again
Tonight I met him again,suddenly,without preparation.
It was a little dine together with friends.Who know we would have dinner in the same resterant.
I can't breathe when his friends call his name.And I didn't myself when my friend besides me called him turned his head.So happy he is now,so different condition I guessed.
And his new girlfriend who more beautiful and more gentle,are sitting arrounds him.
I couldn't think anything now,in a word.
1. dinner
2. restaurant
3. You suddenly changed from past to present tense. Try "I couldn't breathe when his friends called his name."
4. him and he turned
5. Try: "He is so happy now. This is so different than when I saw him last."
6. who is more beautiful
7. is sitting beside him
This is beautiful :D I have so been there :D
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