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My Translation work The years ago, Mary did what many Americans dreamed about. She opened a household device store in her neighborhood after quitting her executive position. People like Nancy made such decision mainly for the improvement of the quality of their lives. However, running a business on a small scale is not easy at all. Losing her steady income, Nancy had to cut back the daily expenses. Sometimes, she even could not afford the insurance. Via the efforts, fortunately, Nancy has got through the hardest period. She decided to continue pursuing her desirable better life.

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You should provide the original version (which I assume to be Chinese) also. This way bilinguals can help you better. We may able to correct your work but there are too many guesses and in the end, the original tone and intent may not be the same.
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Ten years ago, Nancy..... I am really CARELESS.....

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