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First notebook entry: Introducing myself HELLO every body I am GHALI i,m thirty ,i,m from libya & i,m an electric engineer but i am working as a fisher man i live in a small town by the meditrranean sea i like swimming ,diving ,other ..... i,m learning English because i want to communication with people from all over the wold

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everybody.

I am Ghali, I'm thirty years old and I'm from Libya. I'm an electric engineer but I am working as a fisher man. I live in a small town by the Meditrranean Sea.  I like swimming ,diving etc...... I'm learning English because I want to communicate with people from all over the world. < Why?

I'm --- I'm --- I'm  <<<< (Study capitalization)

HOW  MANY mistakes isn't important. 
WHAT KIND of mistakes is important.

Look closely.

Red                  = Capitalization

Blue                 =  Correction and Spelling

Green               =  A more natural way to say / more common

Purple               =  My comment or suggestion

Underline          =  Punctuation  and/ or  spacing


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