First notebook entry: Introducing myself
HELLO every body I am GHALI i,m thirty ,i,m from libya & i,m an electric engineer but i am working as a fisher man i live in a small town by the meditrranean sea i like swimming ,diving ,other ..... i,m learning English because i want to communication with people from all over the wold
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello everybody.I am Ghali, I'm thirty years old and I'm from Libya. I'm an electric engineer but I am working as a fisher man. I live in a small town by the Meditrranean Sea. I like swimming ,diving etc...... I'm learning English because I want to communicate with people from all over the world. < Why?
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Underline = Punctuation and/ or spacing
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