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Mid-Autumn Festival
“独在异乡为异客,每逢佳节倍思亲,遥知兄弟登高处,便插茱萸少一人”。Aha, today is a very important Chinese traditional festival------Mid-Autumn Festival! Do you eat moon cakes? (too heavy and sweet!) I like eating them, especially with egg yolk, so delicious. Oh, in southern China, we usually have taros and “小汤圆”(I don‘t know how to say it in English - small sweet stick-rice bean balls?) with all kinds of stuffing in the morning, also delicious. Do you want to eat them? Ha, I think you must be hungry now!At last, the most important point I want to wanna say is , "Don't forget to go home and haveing supper with your parents".
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Mid-Autumn Festival
“独在异乡为异客,每逢佳节倍思亲,遥知兄弟登高处,便遍插茱萸少一人”。Aha,today is a very important Chinese traditional festival------Mid-Autumn Festival ! Do you eat moon cakes? I like eating them,especially with egg yolk,so delicious.Oh, in southern China,we usually have taros and “小汤圆”(I don‘t know how to say it in English ) with all kinds of stuffing in the morning ,also delicious.Do you want to eat them?Ha,I think you must be hungry now !At last ,the most important point i wanna say is , "Don't forget to go home having supper with your parents".
Don't write anything in Chinese if you cannot translate in an English essay. Not everyone knows Chinese.
独在异乡为异客,Alone in a strange villiage, a stranger whom I am,
每逢佳节倍思亲,Whenever festivities come, I think of my beloved ones/family.
遥知兄弟登高处,Here, from afar, I know my brethren are high up in places,
遍插茱萸少一人 Sticking all over silverberries but with one person less.
Putting silverberries (Elaeagnus, Cornus officinalis) and other fragrant herbs is a tradition in keep evil at bay.
小汤圆, In LA, we call them Chinese Mochi.
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