My experiences in London

I've been in (to) London three times until now (before).

(the) First time I was eighteen and I went to England with my sister for (to) study English during (for) three weeks in Summer. The school was close to Leeds but we also had the opportunity to visit other cities, among which (including) London. It has been (was) a beautiful experience but (was) too short!
I better experienced London the second time I went there for (a) holiday with my ex boyfriend. We booked a room in a bed & breackfast near Regent's Park, it was Winter and it was very cold. London seemed to me amazing (to me)! I was fascinated with the Tate Modern, the National Gallery, St. Paul Cathedral, Westminister Abbey, Tower Bridge... and then the beautiful markets, my passion! My favourite was Brick Lane market, but also liked Portobello Road market and Covent Garden market.
Last time I was in London was in 2007 and I went there alone for a month in Summer. I wanted to improve my English and, why not, have fun! I rented a room in a flat and spent three hours every day studing in a language school. This allowed me to know a lot of people and I always had a lot of funny things to do with my flatmates and friends from the school. That was the best part of this experience: (the) people! Today I am still in contact with some of them and I am very happy for this. (because of this)
I have a beautiful memory memories of all the times in London and I hope to come back soon.


Revisions would be very (really) appreciated!

è molto buono!

My experiences in London

I've been in London three times until now.
The first time, I was eighteen and I went to England with my sister for to study English during for three weeks in the summer. The school was close to Leeds but we also had the opportunity to visit other cities, among which including London. It was has been a beautiful lovely experience but too short!
I better experienced London better the second time I went there for holiday with my ex boyfriend. We booked a room in a bed & breackfast near Regent's Park. It was Winter and it was very cold. London seemed to me amazing to me! I was fascinated with the Tate Modern, the National Gallery, St. Paul's Cathedral, Westminister Abbey, Tower Bridge... and then the beautiful markets, my passion! My favourite was Brick Lane market, but also liked Portobello Road market and Covent Garden market.
The last time I was in London was in 2007 and I went there alone for a month in  the summer. I wanted to improve my English and, why not, have fun! I rented a room in a flat and spent three hours every day studing in a language school. This allowed me to know meet a lot of people and I always had a lot of funny things to do with my flatmates and friends from the school. That was the best part of this experience: people! Today I am still in contact with some of them and I am very happy for about this.
I have a beautiful lovely memory of all these times in London and I hope to come back soon.


Revisions would be very appreciated a lot!

My experiences in London

I've been in London three times until now/so far.
First time I was eighteen and I went to England with my sister, in Summer, for to study English during for three weeks in Summer. The school was close to Leeds, but we also had the opportunity to visit other cities, among which was London. It has been was a beautiful experience but too short!

I better experienced much more of London the second time I went there, for holiday with my ex then boyfriend. We booked a room in a Bed & Breakfast (B&B) near Regent's Park; it was Winter and it was very cold. London seemed to me amazing! I was fascinated with the Tate Modern, the National Gallery, St. Pauls Cathedral, Westminister Abbey, the Tower Bridge... and then the beautiful markets, my passion! My favourite was Brick Lane market, but I also liked Portobello Road market and Covent Garden markets.

The Last time I was in London was in 2007 and I went there alone for a month in Summer. I wanted to improve my English and, why not, have fun! I rented a room in a shared flat and spent three hours every day studying in a language school. This allowed me to get to know a lot of people, and I always had a lot of funny things to do with my flatmates and friends from the school. That was the best part of this experience: people! Today I am still in contact with some of them and I am very happy for about this.

I have a beautiful memories of all the times in London and I hope to come back return soon.


Revisions would be very greatly/most appreciated!