What makes me feel amazing amazes is that I dreamted all of this the last night. In my dream, there floats a few golden beam behind one person someone whose face I can't could not recognize. And Then there shows was a big large tower which scatters the from which golden light was enamating. It's was so beautiful., but what's the meaning, it's so confuse However, I could not understand the significance. Does it hid any hint of Was it trying to tell me something? 

But anywayWhatever it was, I believe it was something good. think it could be associate with good things.^^

Nice description.  I like your essay conclusion.  From a physical description to a more personable feeling.  You need to write more often and learn how not to write too much Chinglish.  This will take much effor from you but if you have 恆心, you will succeed :)

Opening ceremony of the Kaiyuan Temple

The day before yesterday, it held a grand ceremony was held for the Buddhist opening in of Kaiyuan Temple here. Numerous pelple from different places of in China came here to participate in and watch the ceremony.

It was said that at the beginning, the Buddha's light towered with the Buddhist monks reciting scriptures. However, people were not allowed to get into the Temple during the process . In addition, there are so many people, thus, that many person could not have a look at the magnificent light. And later, they lift the ban, Later the ban was lifted so that we can could get into the Temple, and we can see many respected monks and nuns who are kindly communicate with people and help them figure out their puzzles. And there locates In certain rooms different kinds of Buddhas were located in certain room surrounded by crowds. They looks scared. People pay respect to them, because they are symbols of the truth and kindness, and always bringing brought them faith and hope.~~

What makes me feel amazing is that I dreamed this the last night. In my dream, there was floating a few golden beams behind one person whose face I couldn't recognize.  And there shows I see a big tower which scatters the golden light. It's so beautiful, but what's the meaning of it, it's so confusing. Does it hid any hide a hint of something?
But anyway, I think it could be associated with good things.^^

The Opening Ceremony of The Kaiyuan Temple

The day before yesterday, it held a was the grand opening ceremony for the Buddhist opening in Kaiyuan Temple here. Numerous pelple Throngs of people from different places various parts of China came here to participate and watch the ceremony [Understood].

It was said that that in At the beginning, there was  Buddha holy illumination [I guess you are using the term 佛光 but most will not understand this literal translation] light towering with above the Buddhist monks reciting the scriptures. However, people the public were not allowed to get in the Temple during the process to enter the buidling during the ceremony. In addition, there are so many people, thus,many person could not have a look on the Hence no one was able to withness this magnificencet light. And later, they lift the ban However, when the ceremony had ended, this restriction was lifted and so that we were able to enter. can get in the Temple, and we can see [Again this is understood.  In Chinese, it is okay to repeat and write what is already understood] Many respected monks and nuns [Really? I though the sexes are segregated]  were advising the laity of their problems. who are kindly communicate with people and help them figure out their puzzles. And there locates There were many different kinds of statues of the various Buddhas in certain room surrounded by crowds in different rooms and always crowded people. They The statues looks so dignified and beneficence sacred. People paid their respect them, because they are symbols of the truth and kindness;, and always bringing from them their faith and hope will always endure.