My Father

My father is a fat man who loves drinking. My mother wants him to stop drinking the wine, but he always says that a true man needs to drink. He is a warm and friendly man. If someone look for help to him looks to him for help/asks him for help then, whatever the problem is, he promise to fix it. My father is a good father, he cares about my studies and my healthy; when I get sick, he would feel very nervous he feels very worried (nervous can be used but when someone is ill, you're more likely to say 'worried'). My father is the most important person to me. His job is very hard. I tell to myself that I should love him as my eyes. This last sentence doesn't translate well into English, you could simply say "I love him more than anything int he world".

 Good to hear you love your dad! Hope this helps a bit :)

My Father

My father is a fat man.  He loves drinking. My mother wants he him to stop drinking the wine,but he always says inisists that a true real man need to drinks.He is a hot warm and friendly. man,if someone look for help to him,whatener the problem is,he promise it If anyone needs help, no matter what the problem maybe, he will help and never backup on a promise.  My father He is a good father. He cares for me and worries about me whether in about my study or well being. studing and healthy,Whenever I get am sick, he would feel very nervous frets and becomes antsy.  My father He is the my most important man. [Don't use "person".  How would your mother feel? Which is better, 他是我最垂要的人? 他是我最垂要的男人?] people to me,his He works is very hard. ,I tell to myself that I should love him as my eyes.[不懂, 只是猜猜] In my eyes, he is the most loving man.

My Father

My father is a fat man, he loves drinking, my mother wants him to stop drinking the wine, but he always says that a true man needs to drink. He is a warm and friendly man, if someone looks for help from him, whatener the problem is, he promises to solve it. My father is a good father, he cares about my studies and healthy,when I get sick, he would feels very nervous. My father is the most important person for me, he works is very hard, I tell to myself that I should love him as much as I love my eyes.