chinese sentence translation

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1. Mary is very busy before and after the exams. So she won’t go out to work
马丽很忙在考试前后。 所以她不会出去工作。在考试的前后, 马丽很忙,因此不會上工(班)的.
2. Although I do not often call home, I still care a lot for my parents.
虽然我不经常家里打电话問候家中，我还是非常关心我的怀父母。 关心 = worry
3. At that moment, only I was in the classroom and I didn’t have a mobile. Seeing the heavy rain, I really didn’t know how to return home.
在那一刻， 只有我在教室当时我没有手机。 我看见大雨， 我不能知道返回在家。

在課室裡的一刻, 發覺沒帶手机, 看到大雨盤下, 不知怎樣回家
4. David first studied Chinese in Shanghai and later went to Beijing to study.
大卫在上海首先学习了中文，然后来去才到北京学习。

5. Suddenly a dog ran out and frightened the little boy.
狗突然尽了吓唬了小男孩子。 突然間有隻小狗跑出來, 把小孩[子]嚇了一跳.  孩子 is son.  daughter is 女兒
6. All her friends persuaded Lin Na not to get married to Mark. But she still thought Mark was the best choice for her.
所有她的朋友劝林娜不结婚給吗克。但是她仍然认为标记是她的最佳的

所有的朋友(大家)都勸導林娜不要嫁給吗克, 可是她還认为他是最含適的選擇

Woman married to a man is 嫁.  Note the individual character, woman "married" to the "family"

Man married to a woman is 娶, the "taking" of a woman! Even in English we say, "A man marries a woman" and "A woman is married to a man."

chinese sentence translation

Please see if the English sentences are correctly translated into English. Thank you.
1. Mary is very busy before and after the exams. So she won’t go out to work
马丽很忙在考试前后。 所以她不会出去工作。 玛丽在考试前后很忙，所以她不会出去工作。
2. Although I do not often call home, I still care a lot for my parents.
虽然我不经常家里打电话，我还是关心我的父母。
3. At that moment, only I was in the classroom and I didn’t have a mobile. Seeing the heavy rain, I really didn’t know how to return home.
在那一刻， 只有我在教室当时我没有手机。 我看见大雨， 我不能知道返回在家。 在那一刻，只有我独自留在教室，而且我没有带手机。我不知道如何回家看着大雨。
4. David first studied Chinese in Shanghai and later went to Beijing to study.
大卫在上海首先学习了中文，后来去北京学习。 大卫先在上海学习了中文，后来去了北京学习。
5. Suddenly a dog ran out and frightened the little boy.
狗突然尽了吓唬了小男孩子。 一只狗突然跑了出来，吓唬一个小男孩。
6. All her friends persuaded Lin Na not to get married to Mark. But she still thought Mark was the best choice for her.
所有她的朋友劝林娜不结婚給吗克。但是她仍然认为标记是她的最佳的。  琳娜的所有朋友劝琳娜不要跟马克结婚，但是琳娜认为马克是她的最佳人选（选择）。

chinese sentence translation

Please see if the English sentences are correctly translated into English. Thank you.
1. Mary is very busy before and after the exams. So she won’t go out to work
马丽很忙在考试前后很忙。所以她不会出去工作。
2. Although I do not often call home, I still care a lot for my parents.
虽然我不经常给家里打电话，但是我还是很关心我的父母。
3. At that moment, only I was in the classroom and I didn’t have a mobile. Seeing the heavy rain, I really didn’t know how to return home.
在那一刻， 只有我在教室而且当时我没有手机。 我看见大雨，看着大雨 ，我真的不能知道怎么回家返回在家。
4. David first studied Chinese in Shanghai and later went to Beijing to study.
大卫在上海首先在上海学习了中文，后来又去北京学习。
5. Suddenly a dog ran out and frightened the little boy.
狗突然跑出来尽了吓坏唬了小男孩子。 

6. All her friends persuaded Lin Na not to get married to Mark. But she still thought Mark was the best choice for her. 
琳娜所有她的朋友都劝林娜她不要嫁结婚給吗克马克(不要和马克结婚) 。但是她仍然认为标记马克是她的最佳的选择/马克是她的最佳选择。