To live alone in this world.
Seven lonely days make one lonely week; seven lonely nights make one lonely me.
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To live alone in this world.
Seven lonely days make one lonely week; seven lonely nights make one lonely me.
Nothing to correct this beautiful but sad line. I would express the sentiment by using Old English to make it more poetic by changing "make" into "maketh". Also you can remove "make" entirely by using punctuations.
Seven lonely days; one lone[ly] week. Seven lonely nights; one lonely me.
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