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Writing an e-mail TO. Holiday Inn´s Manager SUBJECT: Lost t-shirt Dear Sir/ Madam, My name is Xilea XXX and I was in your Holiday Inn two days ago. When I returned home, I noticed that I have not my favourite t-shirt in my suitcase. I have looked for this in all my baggage, but I have not been able to find it. I think I left it in my room (room 383)... Could you ask Holiday Inn´s staff if they have found it, please? It is a blue t-shirt, without sleeves and with a superhero´s pattern, small size. Actually, it is not expensive, but it is very important for me, becouse it is my charm. I usually wear it when I need luck for something, for example to take a difficult exam. For this reason, I beg you to try to find it. If you find it, it would be grateful if you could send it to my address. Of course, I would pay for all cost. Thank you for your attention, Faithfully, Xilea XXX C/ Italki, 99 Zaragoza Aragón (Spain)

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Writing an e-mail

TO. Holiday Inn´s Manager
SUBJECT: Lost t-shirt


Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Xilea XXX and I was in your Holiday Inn two days ago.

When I returned home, I noticed that I have not my favourite t-shirt was not in my suitcase. I have looked for this it in all of my baggage, but I have not been able to find it.

I think I left it in my room (room 383)... Could you ask Holiday Inn´s staff if they have found it, please? It is a blue t-shirt, without sleeveless and with a superhero´s patternlogo, small size small. Actually, Although it is was not expensive, but it is very important for to me, becouse it is it's my lucky charm. I usually wear it when I need luck for something, for example when I have to take a difficult exam. For this reason, I beg you to try to find it.

If you find it, it I would be grateful if you could send it to my address. Of course, I would will pay for all costs. Thank you for your attention.,

Faithfully,

Xilea XXX
C/ Italki, 99
Zaragoza
Aragón (Spain)

 

 

Great job! Good vocabulary & well written. 

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Writing an e-mail

TO. Holiday Inn´s Manager
SUBJECT: Lost t-shirt


Dear Sir/ Madam,

My name is Xilea XXX and I was stayed in your Holiday Inn two days ago.

When I returned home, I noticed that I have not didn't have my favourite t-shirt in my suitcase. I have looked for this it everywhere in all my luggage baggage, but I have not been able to find it.

I think I left it in my room (room 383)... Could you ask Holiday Inn´s staff if they have found it, please? It is a blue t-shirt, without sleeves and with a superhero design, pattern, small size size small. Actually, it is not expensive, but it is very important for to me, because it is my good luck charm. I usually wear it when I need luck for something, for example, to take a difficult exam. For this reason, I beg you to try to find it.

If you find it, it I would be grateful if you could send it to my address. Of course, I would pay for all shipping costs. Thank you for your attention,

Faithfully,

Xilea XXX
C/ Italki, 99
Zaragoza
Aragón (Spain)

 

Good work!

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