Self-correction after re-reading the essay.

Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


Study is widely considered as undergraduate students’ most important task which requires a significant amount of their time. However, in order for students to be fully prepared for their future life, they should also participate in other activities. Personally I completely agree with this view.

On the one hand, many students go to the university to get educational qualifications that will hopefully lead to better career prospects. A lot of effort is required for this goal to be achieved. In order to get their degrees, students have to meet the academic requirements set by their universities by acquiring a given amount of credit hours. In this way, a computer science student will be equipped with knowledge covering a wide range of topics on computer science, such as mathematics, the fundamental principle of computer architecture, the design and analysis of algorithms, the design and implementation of operating systems, when/by the time they graduate. It requires hard work and most of the students’ time of several years to master knowledge of such a broad range.

On the other hand, study should not be the only thing for students to do in universities. Students need to relax after long hours of study because they are not machines, and the time students spend in university should be memorable because it may be the most precious time in life when they are young and energetic without , energetic, and without burdens such as mortgage payments and office politics. So besides hard study studying hard, students should enjoy time with their classmates and friends, have some hobbies, and take part in activities such as sports activities. Those are also important things to do in life, and how a lot of people find their lifelong friends in university.

In conclusion, I agree that students should spend most of their time studying, and I also believe that they should take part in non-study activities.