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i can give (lI Part) With the pass of the time, every one of my lovers looked at me like a few thing, they changed and took the personality of real Casanova... When I accepted that there is not a woman for them in this world, I said for every one of them that: “you need a lot of women” I’m not enough, you could go away and look for you need. Glad to meet you and, I go now!!! The first love in my life, gave me the best present I could have from him, three strong and healthy spermatozoons, and I could have three beautiful and lovely sons. The second love in my life, he left me alone, because, in his opinion: “I want to take the place of his mother”. But truly, he wanted one time for going with an old love…to make comparison of us and to decide between her and me. He said one day, we need a short time separated, later some months we will get back. I knew about other lady she was with me in home, I said to her "I’m cousin of your love", then she spoke and I could hear… I thought since this time there are not in the world men, for I will be competing with another girl like he was a treasure… I prefer to lose this kind of competition before the begining, and don´t to lose my time to make grow the EGO of someone else… Faster than I could think, in few weeks later of our separation, my husband first, and years more later, my second love, they were looking for me, but then, in every time I was so far of them, I was free!. I feet to want them forever. But, love was going on. Then was time I could keep amazing remembrances ¡I like to remember!

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i can give (lI Part)

With the passage of the time, every one of my lovers looked at me like a thing rather than a person few thing, they changed and took on the personality of real Casanovas... When I accepted that there is not one single woman for them in this world, I said for to every one of them that: “you need a lot of women” I’m not enough, you could go away and look for what you need. Glad to meet you and, I'm going now!!!
The first love in of my life, gave me the best present I could have gotten from him, three strong and healthy spermatozoons, and I could have had three beautiful and lovely sons. The second love in my life, he left me alone, because, in his opinion: “I wanted to take the place of his mother”. But truly, he wanted one time for going with to rekindle a relationship with an old love of his …to make comparison of compare us and to decide between her and me. He said one day, we need a short time separated apart, later some in a few months we will get back together. I knew about the other lady she was with me in home, I said to her, "I’m a cousin of your lover", then she spoke and I could hear… I thought since this time then I've believed there are not in the world men, for I will be competing with another girl like he was a treasure…

I prefer to lose get rid of this kind of competition right from the start before the begining, and I don´t like to waste to lose my time to make grow inflating someone else's the EGO. of someone else…

Faster than I could think, in a few weeks later of after our separation, my husband first, and years more later, my second love, they were looking for me, but then, in every time I was so far beyond of them, I was free!.

I feet to want them forever. But, love was going on. Then was time At least I could keep amazing remembrances memories.

I like to remember!

 

Great job, Pati. The sentences in blue were confusing to me. Saludos.

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I prefer to lose this kind of competition before the begining, and I don´t like to lose my time to make grow the EGO of someone else

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