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Learning English
I have been living in Toronto for one year, and my English is pretty poor low. I always try to be focused in trying to learn a little bit more everyday but it looks seems difficult to for me. I watch movies, read books, listen to English songs, music en English as well as and write an essay all each week.s, [Sentence too long]but Still my English does not improve. I do not know what more I need to do..
I took the IELTS test last month and just achieve scored 5.5 in overall score. It The result dissapointed to me was disappointing because at leat I was expecting at least a 6.5 or 7.
English is a beautiful language, and it does not look seem too dificult. I have no idea what my problem is. Anyway I know that learning other language is not easy but at least I think it should not take more than a year to learn in communicating how comunicate with others. Do not you agree with me?
Academically speaking, by my corrections, your level is poor. However, this does not mean that you cannot communicate with others within a year's period of learning as you suggested by your question. We can understand each other.
As for your first question, I believe you problem is that you lack one crucial aspect in learning English. You did not say you speak and practise with others in English. It is very important. You cannot learn a language well if you don't speak it. Even though you may make mistakes, it is okay. Just ask your friends to correct you. If you are shy and afraid to make mistakes in front of others, you will never master any language if you are going to use it as an effective communication tool in daily life.
Learning English
I have been living in Toronto for one year, but my English is still pretty low. I always try to be focused, and study in learn more every day but it looks seems difficult to for me. I watch movies, read books, listen to music/songs in English, as well as write a essay all every weeks, but my English does not improve. I do not know what I need to do. I took IELTS test last month and just achieved just 5.5 in the overall score. It disappointed me/was disappointing to me because at leat I was expecting at least a 6.5 or 7 score.
English is a beautiful language, and it does not look dificult, so I have no idea what my problem is. Anyway I know that learning another language is not easy but at least/worst I think it should not take more than a year to learn how communicate with others. Do not you agree with me?
I am sure you can communicate effectively already!
Learning English
I have been living in Toronto for one year, but my English is still pretty low. I always try to be focused, and study in learn more every day but it looks seems difficult to for me. I watch movies, read books, listen to music/songs in English, as well as write a essay all every weeks, but my English does not improve. I do not know what I need to do. I took IELTS test last month and just achieved just 5.5 in the overall score. It disappointed me/was disappointing to me because at leat I was expecting at least a 6.5 or 7 score.
English is a beautiful language, and it does not look dificult, so I have no idea what my problem is. Anyway I know that learning another language is not easy but at least/worst I think it should not take more than a year to learn how communicate with others. Do not you agree with me?
I am sure you can communicate effectively already!
Learning English
I have been living in Toronto for one year, but my English is still pretty low. I always try to be focused, and study in learn more every day but it looks seems difficult to for me. I watch movies, read books, listen to music/songs in English, as well as write a essay all every weeks, but my English does not improve. I do not know what I need to do. I took IELTS test last month and just achieved just 5.5 in the overall score. It disappointed me/was disappointing to me because at leat I was expecting at least a 6.5 or 7 score.
English is a beautiful language, and it does not look dificult, so I have no idea what my problem is. Anyway I know that learning another language is not easy but at least/worst I think it should not take more than a year to learn how communicate with others. Do not you agree with me?
I am sure you can communicate effectively already!
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