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something for a travel Now we always say that the the realy youth of life is need one time of trave just go for it when you want at once. And the best happiness is when you want to go for a travel there are someone will go with you.Do you have someone?Ya,I have.My best friend we call this relation as"闺蜜"in chinese.She is my classmate in high school,and then we know each other and to be best friend.We didn't to go the same of college.But now she has back for work and we still not in the same city.I always goes back and together with her if i have holisday.The first day of 2013 which is The New Year's Day we decide to go somewhere for a travel.And we would like to go many places,but we don't have enough much money and time.At last we dicide to go to zhejiang province and shanghai province between The National Day .Now we had to book the motel because of there will have too much travelers in that time.But the bad news is the owner want to rise in price so many motel can't book now.By the way ,the price they have updated online is so expensive.To think about that my mini SLRS has gone.Whatever I hope we will have a good time in this travel.So just say good luck to me or blessing me. Part 2:It is a big deal we should do before we leave.And I don't like them very much.But it better than we have a big problem when we are traveling,right?

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something for a travelling

Now we always say that the the really youth of life is need one time of travelling (you can also say to travel) just go for it when you want it at once. And the best happiness is when you want to go for a travel (trip) there are someone  people who will go with you.Do you have someone?Ya,I have.My best friend we call this relation as"闺蜜"in chinese.She is my classmate in high school,and then we know each other and to be best friend.We didn't to go attend the same of  college (or, do you mean both of you attended the same college? Because you have said it that both of you were classmate). But now she has back for work and but still yet, we are not in the same city.I always goes back (to where?) and together with her if i  whenever I have holisday.The first day of 2013 which is The New Year's Day we decided to go somewhere for a travel.And we would like to go many places,but we don't  didn't have enough much money and time.At last we dicide to go to zhejiang province and shanghai province between The National Day .Now, (wthout the comma, you can use then instead of now) we had to book the for (it is not good enough to use the for a noun you are mentioning for the first time in your statement) motel because of there will have too much be  lots of travelers in at that time.But the bad news is the owner want to rise  raise (rise and raise are different in meaning) the price, so, many motel can't book now.By the way ,the price they have updated online is so expensive.To think about that my mini SLRS has gone.Whatever, I hope we will have a good time in this travel.So just say good luck to me or blessing me.

Part 2:It is a big deal we should do before we leave.And I don't like them very much.But it is better than we have a big problem when we are traveling,right?

 

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