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Swiming Last Two days, it was very hot. 这两天, 天气非常热. After work, I decided to swim. It is ten years since last swiming. 下班后,我决定去游泳. 我已经10看没有游泳了. In the way, I still thought I didn't swim so long that if I can float on water. 在路上,我一直在想这么久没有游泳了我是否还能游起来. I worried a little about it. 我有点担心. I saw many people in the water when I had arrived the pool. I haven't taken anything about swiming. 当我到达水池旁边的时候我到看很多人正在游泳. 我没有带任何游泳的东西 because it was a temporary dicision. I bought a swiming cloth and a ticket in the ticket office. 因为这是个临时决定. 我在售票处买了一件泳衣和一张门票. It total spent thirty five yuan. 总共花了35块. I felt comfortable when I dressed in swiming cloth. I walked in water slowly. it was so good. 穿上泳衣,我感觉很凉快, 我慢慢地走向水中,太爽了. when the water caved my neck, I felt a strong pressure from every dirction. 当水淹到我脖子的时候,我感觉到好大的压力. I started to swim. At the begin, there was a little difficult to float but at last I did. 我开始游动. 刚开始,有点困难,最终还是游起来了. After about swum four or five mile I felt tired. I couldn't belive this. 大概游了4,5我觉得很累. 简直让我不敢相信, Maybe the reason was that I didn't swim so long. 原因可能是太久没游了吧 It was dark and the lamb was working. I had stayed in water for one hour yet. 天黑了灯亮起来了,我在也水里待了一个小时. I prepared to go home. Suddenly I felt a hard pain from my leg when I was swiming to bank. 准备回去. 当我游向岸边的时候, 突然我的腿感到一阵剧痛. Then I drank some water, I struggled my head out of the water and swum to bank. 我喝了山几口水, 挣扎着游向岸边. Luckily the place where I was very near the bank. I crept on the bank and sat it down. 幸好我离岸边很近. 我爬上岸然后坐在地上. My leg very hurt and the muscle likes a rock. I pulled my toes powerful. 我的腿非常痛肌肉非常硬, 我用力的拉我的脚趾头. A guy who near me looked at me and knew me in trouble, then came to help me. In few minutes, I felt better. 旁边的一个小伙子看我这样, 就过来帮我. 几分钟后,我感觉好了一些. There is a little hurt in my leg and my arm is very tired now. It was a memorable swiming. 现在我的腿还有点痛, 手很没劲. 这次游泳太难忘了.

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Swimming

 

Last Two days, it was very hot. 

这两天, 天气非常热.

These two days, the weather was very hot.

After work, I decided to go for a swim. It is ten years since last swiming. I have not swam for the last ten years.
下班后,我决定去游泳. 我已经10看没有游泳了.

In the way, I still thought I didn't swim so long that if I can float on water.
在路上,我一直在想这么久没有游泳了我是否还能游起来.

On the way, I was thinking that haven't been swimming for so long, I might not be able to float at all.

I am a bit worried a little about it.
我有点担心.


I saw many people in the water when I had arrived the pool. I haven't taken anything about swiming.
当我到达水池旁边的时候我到看很多人正在游泳. 我没有带任何游泳的东西

When I reached the lake, there were many people swimming.  I did not bring any swimming gear with me.

because it was a temporary dicision. I bought a swiming cloth and a ticket in the ticket office.
因为这是个临时决定. 我在售票处买了一件泳衣和一张门票.
This is because it was an impulse thought, I bought a swimsuit along with a ticket at the entrance.
It total spent thirty five yuan.
总共花了35块.

A total expenditure of thirty-five Yuan.


I felt comfortable when I dressed in swiming cloth. I walked in water slowly. it was so good.
穿上泳衣,我感觉很凉快, 我慢慢地走向水中,太爽了.
I felt comfortable in my swimsuit and I began to ease myself into the water.  It was really great.


when the water caved my neck, I felt a strong pressure from every dirction.
当水淹到我脖子的时候,我感觉到好大的压力.
When the water reached my next, I felt pressure.


I started to swim. At In the beginning, there was a little difficulty to float but at last I did in the end, I was swimming.
我开始游动. 刚开始,有点困难,最终还是游起来了.

After about swum four or five mile I felt tired. I couldn't belive this.
大概游了4,5我觉得很累. 简直让我不敢相信,
About four or five laps, I felt tired. It was incredible [literally: I simply cannot believe this whole thing.  Your original did not state the exact measure.  It cannot be in miles.  It's way too far a distance for even an expert swimmer]
Maybe the reason was that I didn't swim so long.
原因可能是太久没游了吧
Perhaps it is because I did not swim for a very long time.

It was dark and the lamb was working. I had stayed in water for one hour yet.
天黑了灯亮起来了,我在也水里待了一个小时.

It was getting dark and the lights came on.  Still I lingered in the water for another hour.

I prepared to go home. Suddenly I felt a hard pain from my leg when I was swiming to bank.
准备回去. 当我游向岸边的时候, 突然我的腿感到一阵剧痛.

As I was preparing to leave, I swam towards the shore when suddenly I felt a sudden pain in my thighs.

Then I drank some water, I struggled my head out of the water and swum to bank.
我喝了山几口水, 挣扎着游向岸边.
I gulped in a few mouthfuls of water but I stuggled towards the shore.
Luckily the place where I was very near the bank. I crept on the bank and sat it down.
幸好我离岸边很近. 我爬上岸然后坐在地上.

Luckily the shore was not too far away and I was able to get out of the water and sat down.

My leg very hurt and the muscle likes a rock. I pulled my toes powerful.
我的腿非常痛肌肉非常硬, 我用力的拉我的脚趾头.
My thigh muscles was tightened to a solid mass.  I used pulled on my toes.


A guy who near me looked at me and knew me in trouble, then came to help me. In few minutes, I felt better.
旁边的一个小伙子看我这样, 就过来帮我. 几分钟后,我感觉好了一些.
Nearby was some guy who saw the situation and came to help.  A few minutes later, I felt better.

There is a little hurt in my leg and my arm is very tired now. It was a memorable swiming.
现在我的腿还有点痛, 手很没劲. 这次游泳太难忘了.

My thigh is still a bit achy and no strength in my arms.  This swim is very unforgetable.

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Swimming

The last two days, it was very hot.
这两天, 天气非常热.

After work, I decided to swim. It is ten years since I was last swimming.
下班后,我决定去游泳. 我已经10看没有游泳了.

In a way, I still thought I hadn't swum in so long that I might not be able to on water.
在路上,我一直在想这么久没有游泳了我是否还能游起来.

I worried a little about it.
我有点担心.


I saw many people in the water when I had arrived the pool. I haven't taken anything for swimming.
当我到达水池旁边的时候我到看很多人正在游泳. 我没有带任何游泳的东西

Because it was a temporary dicision, I had just bought a swimming cloth and a ticket in the ticket office.
因为这是个临时决定. 我在售票处买了一件泳衣和一张门票.

It cost a total of  thirty-five yuan.
总共花了35块.


I felt comfortable when I dressed in a swimming cloth. I walked in the water slowly. It was so good.
穿上泳衣,我感觉很凉快, 我慢慢地走向水中,太爽了.

When the water reached my neck, I felt a strong pressure from every dirction.
当水淹到我脖子的时候,我感觉到好大的压力.

I started to swim. At the beginning, it was a little difficult to float but at last I did.
我开始游动. 刚开始,有点困难,最终还是游起来了.

After swimming for about four or five miles I felt tired. I couldn't believe this.
大概游了4,5我觉得很累. 简直让我不敢相信,

Maybe the reason was that I hadn't swum for so long.
原因可能是太久没游了吧


It was dark and the lamb was working. I had stayed in water for one hour yet.
天黑了灯亮起来了,我在也水里待了一个小时.

I prepared to go home. Suddenly I felt a hard pain from my leg when I was swimming to the bank.
准备回去. 当我游向岸边的时候, 突然我的腿感到一阵剧痛.

Then I drank some water, I struggled to get my head out of the water and swum to bank.
我喝了山几口水, 挣扎着游向岸边.

Luckily the place where I was was very near the bank. I crept on the bank and sat it down.
幸好我离岸边很近. 我爬上岸然后坐在地上.

My leg very hurt very much and the muscle was like a rock. I pulled my toes powerfully.
我的腿非常痛肌肉非常硬, 我用力的拉我的脚趾头.

A guy who near me looked at me and knew I was in trouble, then came to help me. In few minutes, I felt better.
旁边的一个小伙子看我这样, 就过来帮我. 几分钟后,我感觉好了一些.


There is a little hurt in my leg and my arm is very tired now. It was a memorable swiming.
现在我的腿还有点痛, 手很没劲. 这次游泳太难忘了.

 

[Very good.  Did you mean 5 miles or 5 minutes?  5 miles is a very long distance, even for an experienced swimmer.]

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